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The Japanese Tourists started travelling to Australia in 1985 were around 4.5 millions and in the following year it had gone up 1/4 million more than 1985 The number of tourist increased steadily till 1990 from 1/2 million to 1 1/2 million and at the same time there was a fall in the figure in 1991 about 1/4 million tourists comparing the 1990 as one can say it surge. In 1992 it picked up again and gone upto 11 3/4 million tourists (ie) 3/4 million more than the year 1991. In 1993 it reached up 12 million tourists and in 1994 and gone steadily increased till 1995. In 1994 it reached 13 3/4 million and in 1995 it touched around 15 1/2 million tourists. In the same time if you talk in percentage of the Japanese tourists between 1985 to 1995 (ie) Australia's share of Japan's tourist Market it stood from 2 percentage to 6 percentage in 1995 and at the same time it reached its peak in 1994 more than 6.25%. When you see the graph it gone upto 4.9% in 1989 and there was a surge again in 1990, and it was about 4.25%. The increasement started from 1991 till 1994 at the rate of 2% approximately every year and at last in 1995 the percentage dropped about .25%. The highest Japanese tourists travelling abroad was in 1995 and at the same time highest percentage was in 1994 (ie) 6.25%

There are many kinds of work people interested in at companies. Young people are not enough work experience in their lives so they consider to try to work in a shop. Most people need to work experience in their lives before they apply to the many kinds of companies. They interested in work in their live and have experience because they want to know how to do work in a area of position in their lives. People enjoy their work experience. When young people are learn to how to work they have good experience because they can understand and their parents of work for the stricts. However if they do not have work experience they don't understand what do they feel therefore It is important to them. Many people have confidence and resposibility. When they have work experience. They need to have confidence about their work because. If they do not have their confidence their job is not succeed so they need to have confidence. Also they need to have responsibility because if they do not have responsibility they have trouble with customer therefore that company is not reliable from coustomer. Also consumer have give to claim to the company so the company have problem. However when young people learn to these things it is good for them. Many countries children do not know how to strict area about work place. They usually go to school and studying so they do not know how to strict place therefore if they have work experience they can lean and think about work.

The diagram illustrates how to use water in order to generate electricity. The diagram shows that the process of producing electricity involves as natural resources, like water, as well as special human-built equipment. First of all, the sun energy evaporates some of the water from a sea. Evaporation forces clouds to form. While the rain goes the water is collected in a purpose built reservoir. Afterwards, from a dam the water goes through a valve. This movement force a turbine to rotate and this process generates electricity. Finally, the electricity is transferred by high voltage Cables to a transformer station. The stransformer station supplies city buildings such as schools and hospitals with electricity. Moreover, the diagram indicates that the water which is involved in the process is used repeatedly. From the tourbin it goes to a pump and than returnes to the reservoir. Overall, the illustration shows that there are 3 main steps in order to generate electricity: collecting the water, rotating the tourbin and accumulating electricity in the transformer station.

Old buildings not only are still useful, but also keep the history alive. Not all of them have enough history to say that it's better to maintain it. In my opinion only the buildings that really involve nation's history could be maintain, because its will remain to the people the traditions, culture, and stories that relavant people lived before, and this is part of the formal education of each person. Most of the countries of the world at least have important people that help to constructed the nation, or fight for the independence, or are just important because They changed the social, political, economical or even musical environment of their countries. When people see the places where this people lived and where they develop their acts, these places or buildings help to reconstruct the stories and are useful for imagine how was the situation before. So every time that people will see This buildings or monuments they are able to remain the history and also learn about it. Finally nowadays human beings are capable to maintain this buildings in good conditions, even they can modernize them but without change their principal structure and fronts. On the other hand it's true that the cities of the world have to continue with its development. Therefore they have to build new buildings that allow people work with better and modern environments that let them work efficiently and also that offer development resources. New buildings brings new technologye as well, that could improve the efficiency, productivity and production of different companies, organizations, shops, offices, etc. In conclussion some buildings would be knocked down to make way progress and development. However that old buildings that have important history for human beings should be maintain. If we knocked down these buildings we would knocked down our traditions, culture, history and even some part of our lives.

When we see the graph, domestic household is different of others. According to the graph number of complaints remained stable about factories noise from 1984 to 1966. It means most of skills and something made from factories. However society is getting change, so in the future people don't have to go factories, they can do most of things, at home. Maybe factories will be decrease. Number of complaints dropped steadily about road works from 1980 to 1996. It shows us most of road works, were formed in the past. Now days people don't have to road works because there already were todays. Number of complaints increased sharply about traffic noise from 1990 to 1996. It remained the same from 1980 to 1984. then it dropped from 1985 to 1988. However it increased from 1988, it means, many people have their own car and society is getting change. Now-days cars are necessary in our life and it will be increase continues. Number of complaints reached almost peak about domestic household in 1996. It increased suddenly from 1990, and it is highest to others. It means people want domestic and many people did that.

the evolution in technology nowadays is very rampant. People do not even recognize changes from one to another. There are a lot of modern equipment, appliances and even simple machines are available in the market. Competitors in business industries keep doing transformation, product development and more research works. Sometimes their own products compete each other. One of these modern equipments or appliances in the market that is very saleable is the telivision. Telivision dominates the communication and entertainment industries long time ago. Starting from the Black and White TV, here comes the Colored TV. In addition, Cable TV is now available in the market. In Southeast Asia, particularly in the Philippines, the most saleable appliances in the market is the television. Even the ordinary vendors in the market or in the side walk avail one so that they can watch telivision while working. Businessmen and employees watch TV for news and general information. Housekeepers and housewives, together with the children entertain themselves with the variety shows and soap operas through television. Everyone, in all walk of life uses telivision as one of their 'mate' in life there are some issues that modernization, new technology including television is dangerous for children or for the whole family because it destroys a sense of community and belongingness and sometime it influence the young people in their principle in life. In conclusion, telivision is a modern appliance that can help a lot in the life of each and everyone. It has it's own disadvantages too. It can do good or can influence bad paradigms to the people, but I believe that the result of the use or watching TV depends on the person or family themselves. Together w/ the development is the consequence of having great discipline in oneself.

Dear Sir or Madam, Hi. I write you this letter to report some problems with public transport in my area recently. I live in 'Blair Athol' and usually take Bus 224 from my home to Mawson Lakes Campus. But in the last 4 weeks, the bus has been frequently late. Sometimes the bus arrived late up to 20 minutes. The timetable seems useless. As a result, I have been caught late for the courses several times, which is embarrassing. I don't know what the reason is for the problem, but it's obviously affecting people's regular lives. For instance, if a staff comes to work late, he may lose his customers, and even worse, he may lose his job. People may endure a few times of the late transport, but they cannot hold on for many times. People need precise and accurate arrangement with their lives. So, I suggest you could solve this problem as soon as possible. Please notify the drivers to be on time. If current timetable is outdated, please notify the public the change. I wish this can be solved after you receive my letter. Thanks for your attention. Regards Yours

Everyone has to eat. The question is, where to eat ? You may cook and eat at home, or just eat out in restourants or canteens. My personal opinion is that eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out. First, it has no doubt that cooking and eating at home can save a lot of money. Generally, the cost of eating in restourants is much higher than eating at home. By cooking at home, you don't have to pay the labor fee for the chef, and don't have to pay tips to the waiter. What you have to do is just a little hand operation and a little time. From supermarkets, you can buy cheap vegetables and meat, which may cost only 10 percent of the same food in a restourant. Sometimes, you can get cheaper food in discount time. Especially, a big family may enjoy the method, as the monthly cost would be less. Second, you can freely select your favorite food to cook. A restaurant cannot always provide you with delicious food. The taste of food in restourants is usually designed for the public, which is not suitable for a particular guest. If you miss the taste of your mum's soup, it's not likely to find the same one in a restourant. In this case, the best choice is to cook by yourself, to reproduce your mum's food to the best you can. Finaly, it's obvious that eating at home is more healthy and clean. You don't know whether it's dirty in the restourants, and also you don't know whether the food is fresh. But by cooking at home, you can know everything about the cooking materials. Moreover, it's easy to control the usage of fat and oil, unless you don't care to become too fat. In brief, I believe that eating at home is healthy and clean. If people want to save money, eating at home is also a good choice. In addition, people can cook what they like as well. So I personally prefer eating at home.

Dear Sir or Madam I feel I must express my disappointment. I have received a new air conditioning system which has heating system as well. It is a new design in this year, convenient button function, and can fix on the wall. When I received, I was absolutely delighted. However I was using for 3 nights. Unfortunately I found some problems with it. Firstly If I switch it on it was such a big noisy. Secondly, as we all know nowadays very cold. Thus I bought this incredibly heating system doesn't working. if I turn on the heating switch only blew the cold wind. Consequently I couldn't sleep over very well. In addition, I had ordered marvelous violet colour. However I received fair beige colour. it was quite unbalance with my furnitures. I am still very upsetting. I think that is not reasonable cost. I paid over £2000. I think you would consider to give me discount it if I go to your shop again. And Changing the another air conditiong system and heating system which is violet colour as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you shortly Yours faithfully

In this task two, I want to like the people should be allowed to continue to work for as long as they want to. If the people are working some concern, or the Government, they are always very free in mind, and they can "earn more money". If one can earn lot, he spend it some thing. Like most of the people want to build a house first, than they get many facilities. All are wanted now-a-days earn more money and they buy a car, all well furnished house, furniture, good articles, [espicially ladies spend lot of the money in her valuable articles, such as gold chain, hellace, bangles, and earings etc...]. In this context, I want to clarify one thing. That is if the Government or such concern are to restrict once "retirement", All of a sudden people will depressed. In my opinion, one who is elegible for working in his line, the company or the Government will not "disturbed" or forced to retire the people. The concern can give all the facilities to their employers, like, House Rent, conveyance allowance, educational allowance and the most important thing is the medical facilities are provide for their employers. one who satisfied in his or her job, they can wonderfully worked for (his or her) concern. So the Government or any other companies are always give much more important to the employers. In my opinion again I will tell the companies & Governments "do not forced to retire at a particular age such as 60 or 65" In a person who is not able to work in his 50th year, then he applied voluntary retirement. In this aspect the concern must provide all the benefit to this person. Such as, provident fund, ESI, Medical allowance and retirement-benefits. One who is satisfied his job, his life is automatically pleasent and his mind is peacefull. So the major companies are give more and more facilities. Finally, I would like to request all the concerns, do not forced to retire at a particular age limit in his employers. Please allowed people should enjoy and continue to work for as long as they want. This is in my view point, to tell the good companies and all the Governments. Thanking you.

The charts shows the oil resources held, together with the proportions consumed within the same area each year, in different areas of the world It is obvious that the region holding the most oil sources is the Middle East, with 56.52%, over a half of total world oil resources. While in the United States and Asia, the level of oil consumed each year is far more away from the oil resources they hold. The percentage of total world oil consumption of United States and Asia are 23.48% and 26.21% respectively. They are the two highest oil consumption region in the world. Another place that is worth mentioned will be the Western Europe. With about twenty percent of total world oil consumption, the Western Europe merely holds less than 1.5% of the oil resources in the world. Regions that are not mentioned above have the close percentage between oil holding and consuming. Whereas Canada has the higher level of oil holding than consuming, the respective figures are 14.84% and 2.48%. Overall, the charts suggest that Middle East is the only majority of oil resources held, While Asia, United States and Western have the highest level of oil resources imported.

It's generally supposed that the younger people should respect and take care of older people. Nowadays, many people think that the older people are the problem of modern society. However, How people should give the important older people in this present time for preventing the problem in society. In many countries are facing of this problem because many people are responsible everything in their lifes, For example, One person has many roles in society such as parents, boss and teacher etc. This reason make someone who forget older people. Some countries, many older people live alone which the government has not pension and facilities for them. In my country this is the problem because older population are increasing every year. They don't have a house for living, don't have money and children and cousins don't take care of them. The government must be help them by providing many houses which this case invest a lot of money to making this project. On the other hand, In some countries, The government help and support the older people for instance, European people have pension and good facilities such as, free for seeing doctor don't paying when taking the public transportation. I totally agree with this view that my country provide it for them. It is the good reason

The diagrams indicate the alterations being made to the school from 2004 to 2024 to accomodate for the predicted increase in student numbers from 600 to 1,000. In 2004, the school only has one car park with a path leading from the main entrance to the sports field. The path seperates the two school buildings which, together with the sports field, are located north. Trees are present north, north-east, east, and west of the school. In comparison the school planned for 2024 has two carparks and three school buildings. The path in the 2024 plan links building three to buildings one and two, which are planned to be joined together by building infrastructure. A road is envisioned to connect carpark two with carpark one. In addition the sports field will be reduced in size and relocated south of its previous location below carpark two. The surrounding trees remain in similar positions only requiring a few trees to be repositioned or replanted around new infrastructure. These changes to the school buildings, road, path, carparks and sportsfield aim to house the extra 400 students planned to be attending the school in 2024. The only decrease in size of any part of the school from 2004 to 2024 is the sports field in order to accomodate school building number three.

I MOST DEFINITELY AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT, AND I AM CONVINCED THAT IF MORE PEOPLE WOULD SHARE THIS AGREEMENT, MANY OF TODAY'S PROBLEMS COULD BE AVOIDED AND, UNDER THE RISK OF SOUNDING CANDID, "THE WORLD WOULD BE A BETTER PLACE". IF ONE IS AWARE OF THE GENERAL, WESTERN (WELL, GLOBAL REALLY) CIVILIZATIONAL TENDENCY TOWARDS LIVING WITHIN CLOSED GROUPS, ALMOST FROM "BIRTH TO DEATH", ONE MAY FIND THAT ADRESSING THE SUBJECT AT THE EARLIEST MOMENT POSSIBLE IS A REASONABLE POSSIBILITY OF STARTING TO FIGHT THAT TENDENCY. CHILDREN ARE NATURALLY KEPT, IN THE FIRST FEW YEARS OF THEIR LIVES, IN A VERY LIMITED, CONTROLLED ENVIRONMENT, AND THEN GRADUALLY START OPENING UP TO THE WORLD AROUND THEM. SO IT'S VERY IMPORTANT THAT, WHEN THEY START DOING SO, THEY ALSO BEGIN TO UNDERSTAND WHAT SURROUNDS THEM - PEOPLE, RACES, SOCIAL BACKGROUNDS, FAMILY STRUCTURES, RELIGIOUS BELIEFS, ETC. - AS PART OF THE REAL WORLD WHERE THEY WILL LIVE AND BE CALLED TO CHANGE, IMPROVE OR CONDITION. THE ALTERNATIVE TO THIS WILL BE, AS IT IS ALREADY TODAY, THAT CHILDREN WILL LIVE MORE AND MORE ISOLATED FROM REALITY IN ALL ITS VARIED, AND SOMETIMES CRUEL, FEATURES. I BELIEVE THESE CHILDREN, NOT HAVING HAD A CHANCE TO DIRECTLY COMMUNICATE AND INTERACT WITH OTHER KINDS OF CHILDREN, WILL FEAR AND EVEN REJECT SUCH DIFFERENCES. IGNORANCE AND MISUNDERSTANDING IS (HAS BEEN AND WILL BE) ONE IMPORTANT SOURCE OF CONFLICT, AND SOCIAL CONFLICT IN THE FIRST INSTANCE. I THINK I CAN SAY I WAS FORTUNATE ENOUGH TO HAVE ATTENDED AN ELEMENTARY SCHOOL WHICH WAS CHARACTERIZED, AMONG OTHER THINGS, FOR JUST SUCH A FEATURE: EVEN THOUGH IT WAS A PRIVATE SCHOOL, WHERE PARENTS WHO COULD AFFORD IT HAD TO PAY A SUBSTANCIAL FEE, IT HAD A POLICY OF TAKING IN CHILDREN WITH ALL KINDS OF DIFFERENCES. I GOT ACCOSTUMED TO HAVING COLEAGUES AND FRIENDS OF LOWER SOCIAL BACKGROUNDS (ECONOMICALLY SPEAKING), WHO WHERE STATE-FINANCED TO ATTEND THE SCHOOL; WITH DIFFERENT LEARNING HABILITIES (DEAF, MENTALLY DISAVANTAGED, ETC.); AND OF DIFFERENT ETHNIC BACKGROUNDS (ASIAN AND FROM PORTUGUESE AFRICAN EX-COLONIES). I AM VERY CERTAIN THAT THIS PART OF MY EDUCATION HELPED ME BETTER UNDERSTANDING AND ACCEPTING THE WORLD AROUND ME; STILL NOWADAYS I HAVE ALL KINDS OF FRIENDS AND LIKE TO KNOW THINGS ABOUT ALL KINDS OF PEOPLE, AND I KNOW NOT EVERYONE AROUND ME DOES THE SAME.

I am going to talk about summarise. Firstly Republic of Korea people workes in underground probable 22% in this job. Inadition, some of people has a Incineration, I think about 9% they are workes in this job. we can see 66% of the people workes in recycling more than hafe of people they did these job. Secondly sweden the must of people they are workes in the underground, In order to 25% of the people workes in the recycling. Also 20% of Sweden people workes in the Incineration. Thirdly United kingdom they have more than two jobs. For example, British people likes to worke in the Underground because, the contry has a lots of things to do wit in the Underground. that's more the Dumping at sea in the summey. Also the chemical treatmend and Incinevetion they are needed. as much as any job.

Nowaday, the technolodge is much developed than before, and people owened a car is quite normal. however, the car gives us more easier life also takes many problems. every year has many people dead in traffic accidents. Some people think that reduce transport accidents the key is strict punishments for driving offences, I think that is the way and can be done. For me, traffic accident is well-known, as my father had met an accident, and because he drove too fast and too tired. If I told him strict punishments, don't so hurry, this accident might be should n't happen. When people always think that speed can take us excieting, wonderful feeling and forget their family worried about them, their future should be fantastic if they take care, Strict punishment is especially important. However, On the other hand, many ways can improve road safety, for example, more educate in usual life, more adverting on TV, radio, newspapers, limit speed on the road, stronger fines. I think that the most important is foundation, everything happened, nothing can do more. but before it happen, we can learn a plenty of from others accidents, why we drive so fast, why we forget the friends, family's love and worry. Father have to educate children, because of yours mistake, you may be broken two families or more families's happiness. This responsibility is huge that you can't imagin. So, I think foundation is the most need thing to do. let Every one need know about that car or other transports we invented is our life to be easier, not bring us sad, many years ago, not so developed society as now, but the world still turned very good, people's life still happy. why when the technolodge become so develop, lots of unhappy things happened, government should think about it, also our people need attention this problem, than our life will be more comfortable and more safety.

Dear Sir or Madam, It is Mohammad khatib, one of the fans of your newspaper. I am writing this letter to you to let you know of some, I hope, rumors I have heard recently about construction plans in our popular public park. As you know, this is the only park within our immediate vicinity, and many people go there for refreshment and relaxing. So many children also play in this park with their peers. I have recently heard from some of my neighbors that Royal construction company intends to build some apartment blocks in the park. At first I did not take it serious until yesterday that I saw some engineers measuring and calculating diffrent dimensions of the park. We all like our local park including its beautiful fountain; its playground and amusing facilities for children. So, I, as the representative of most of the neighbors have collected signatures against this project. Therefore, we, as local neighbors, disagree with the plan and ask you to please kindly write an article about the disadvantages of this action and express our great disapproval of the plan. We are looking forward to seeing your article as our voice soon. Thanks from your cooperation in advance. Yours faithfully, Mohammad khatib

Unfortunately as the world goes on improving people more and more are eager to have fast foods. It's now a kind of habit for kids and also adults to spend their leisure time at fast food restaurants. On my opinion one of the major reason of using fast foods in many countries is the shortage of time that people face with. It should be investigated properly to solve this subject. As a matter of fact nowadays people in all over the world ought to work outdoors more than before. You know that living expenses are so high that spouses should work together in order to gain more. Therefore they have little time to spend on cooking. Another reason is the great advertisements which being done by TV programs or magazines, tempting every body to use fast food. Now, parents are paying more attention to their children's needs regardless of how much logically they are. They are about to provide their needs even if children are addicted to take fast foods or so. You know that obesity, high cholestrol, diabete and laziness are some outcomes of fast food, and if it is neglected may lead to serious problems. I think nutrition experts are expected to offer more warning programs to people about this matter. Government should spend a special budget on giving people some solution about this subjects. For example making animation programs bearing warning messages for the children is one way to make them aware of it's fate. Or cooking programs which learn how to prepare a healthy food in short time seemed to be usefull in solving this problem. In conclusion, it needs to plan a serious plan and spend more time and budget to find a way on solving the peril of its widespread. I hope every person would be more careful about his or her health especially on nutrition case.

Dear Mr. White, I am writing this letter to explain why I need to take two weeks off and the time about my holidays. I started work in our company at July 2008. Since then I did not go back to China. I found it out in the next few weeks our department do not has lots work to do, So I think maybe it is a good chance for me to take two weeks off and go back to China enjoy the holidays with my family and friends. I checked the next avalieable ticket will be at 01 August 2009, So I am thinking take my holiday from 01/08/2009 to 15/08/2009. I talked with Brian Kiby today, he said he will cover my work during the time I will in China, and I will bring my laptop with me, everyday I will check my emails and will resolve any problems Brian can not fix. Thanks again for your attention, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely

Zoos. We Need You or Not. Last month, I went to the Dublin Zoo with my best friend Jack and his families. I can not remember When was the last time I went to the Zoo and see the animals. anyway it is long time ago. that time I was a kid and I was very very happy. We arrived the zoo around 11:00 AM, Jack's two children they so exciting, Keep running. Keep asking questions Keep taking photos.... but I did not feel happy any more, I saw the "wild animals" were locked in a small cage, they even didn't move at all, you can not believe they lived in the forest before. I felt sorry for them. I talked with Jack about what I felt, he answered, "Pal, I had the same feeling. if you think you give the foods and water to the animals that is enough, no, you wrong, they need freedom, the same as human." Human can fight for their freedom, use their hands, guns, even use their lifes But poor animals they want to do it, but against with their enermy - human. they will never win. When we left the zoo around 4:00 PM in the afternoon, We saw a group deers crossed the road. I saw them running, I even saw their smelling faces. On the other hand, zoos still have some advantages. First, the kids love the zoos, they can get knowledges the books and DVDs can not give to them, use there as a class to teach them love our world, love our earth. Second, you can save the animals, some animals they nearly disapper from the earth, like panda, we have to protect them. Let the number grow up again, and later we can let them back to their real home. Trade the animals as your friend, even if they are in the Zoo, I hope in the future, all the animals will free from the Zoo, enjoy their lifes.