Pie Chart

The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

Pie chart for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about New Zealand Online Retail Sales.
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  1. Band 7.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    The pie charts illustrate the proportion of online sales for travel, film or music, books and clothes in New Zealand in two selected years. In general, travel and film and music made up the largest proportion of the total online sales in two selected years.

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  2. Band 7.5
    Task Achievement
    Band 8.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.0

    The figures illustrate the proportion of four different online retail sales categories in New Zealand in two different periods. It can be seen that the sales of film or music and books in the country had increased over the ten-year period, while travel and clothing sectors were in the opposite position.

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