Semi-Formal Letter

You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter: - introduce yourself - explain what experience and special skills you have - tell him/her when you think you could start

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  1. Band 8.0
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    Band 7.5
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    Band 8.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.5
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    Band 8.0

    Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jenny and I am 30 years old. I came across your advertisement on Facebook and I would love to be a part of your medical team next season.

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    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to enquire about past time vacancy at your football club. I read an advertisement in the ‘Time Express’ about the urgent need for a coach in the YMCA club.

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