In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between inequality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in more egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?

1According to the Ecological Systems Theory, the environment that a person lives in has the most significant influence on his/her personal development. Some argue that certain 2individualpersonal traits are closely associated with a person’s achievement. However, I will argue in this essay that social equality is the key to an individual’s 3overall successsuccess in general 4in two respectsfrom two aspects: gender equality and 5educationaleducation equality.

The roles that women play in societies often vary significantly among different regions of the world. 6Societies that offerSocieties, that offer women more freedom in terms of educational and vocational choices, 7could provide better opportunitiescould possess more desirable opportunities to 8enable women to pursuefacilitate women in pursuing their dreams and achieving their 9potentialpotentials. 10Women in Australia, for example, where the equality between males and females is considerably advance, could be more likely to achieve higher personal successes than women in Pakistan where females often remain inferior than males in society.

12Educational equality is another factorEducation equality is another effect that 13could greatly influencecould largely influence on one’s accomplishment. As human society develops, 14literacythe ability of literacy and 15access to modern technologiesthe access to modern technologies become increasingly important in individuals’ personal development. 16Residents of regions where free fundamental education and better access to technologies, such as the internet and computers, are provided, could have increasing numbers of opportunities to exercise their personal traits, thus, to succeed in the fields of their choices.

To conclude, an egalitarian society can 19help more individuals achieve successfacilitate more achievements among individuals. 20Gender and educational equalityThe gender and education equalities are 21two fundamental forms of equalitytwo fundamental ones that could 22ensure that everyone in society hasensure everyone in the society, both males and females, to have the relatively equal opportunity to succeed.