The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont.

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Sample Response

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The charts illustrate member demographics and loan categoriesmembership demographics, loan categories and total borrowing patterns at Little Chalfont Library in 2016, alongside annual loan volumes over the ten years from 2007 to 2016.

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Overall, adults aged 18 to 64 made up the largest share of library members, while fiction for both adults and children dominated borrowing, each accounting for over a third of all loans. Total lending volumes followed a broadly upward trend across the decade, reaching their highest level in the final year.

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In terms of membership, 51% of registered users were adults aged 18 to 64, followed by children at 22%. Young adults aged 13 to 17 and seniors aged 65 and over represented 15% and 12% respectively12% and 5% respectively. Regarding borrowing habits, adult fiction and children's fiction each comprised 38% of all loans. Adult non-fiction contributed 13%, more than double the 6% recorded for children's non-fiction. Young adult materials, children's DVDs and adult audio booksaudio books collectively made up just 5%.

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Annual loan figures fluctuated between just under 16,000 and nearly 22,000roughly 16,000 and 22,000 from 2007 to 2016. After reaching an early peak in 2011, volumes dipped in 2013 before rising steadily to nearly 22,000recovering steadily. The decade closed with loans at their highest point, Deletethe same year when fiction accounted for the vast majority of borrowing and adults were the primary user group.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 8.0

The response presents a clear structure with an effective overview and excellent grammatical accuracy throughout. Its main weakness lies in a few misread figures from the pie chart regarding age demographics. Double-checking data values before writing will ensure full factual precision in Task 1 reports.

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IELTS Writing Criteria Scores

TA

Task Achievement

7.0
Scoring rule

Key trends and major features are well highlighted, though there are accurate overview points alongside misquoted percentages for two age categories.

Next step

Verify all numeric data directly against the visual legend to prevent misreading chart segments.

CC

Coherence and Cohesion

8.0
Scoring rule

Information is logically grouped into well-defined paragraphs with clear internal progression.

Next step

Maintain this effective paragraph structure while ensuring transitional phrases between different charts remain smooth.

LR

Lexical Resource

8.0
Scoring rule

A wide variety of topic-appropriate vocabulary is used naturally and flexibly without repetition.

Next step

Continue utilizing precise vocabulary collocations when describing proportions and data changes.

GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

8.0
Scoring rule

Sentence structures show high flexibility and complete grammatical control across complex sentence forms.

Next step

Sustain this high level of grammatical precision across all descriptions.