In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
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What do you think are the causes of this?
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What solutions can you suggest?
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TA
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CC
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LR
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积累并使用与教育、行为管理相关的拓展词汇和替换表达。
GRA
1.0语法多样性与准确性
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尝试使用多种句式结构（如因果复合句、条件句等）来独立表达观点。