You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat containing some belongings there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - tell your friend that you left the coat - describe the coat, where you think you left it and what was inside it - suggest how to get it back
Sample Response
Dear Steven, Thanks very much for a great weekend and I really enjoyed my time at your house. Please say hello to Paula, whosePaula whose hospitality is unforgettable. I hope you will both be ableI hope you both will be able to come and stay with me sometime soon. UnfortunatelyRegrettably, I left my new coat at your house. I probablyhouse, I probably left it on the hooks in the guest room. Do you remember the black coat that I wore when I arrived at your house? It is a black tic classic fit car coat that goes down to mid-thigh level. It has a zippered inner bib, a quilted lining, three large buttons and side pocketsside pockets on both sides. It's made of wool and nylon and I am sure you will finddetect it as soon as you look at it. I have left my wallet in the left pocket of the coat and the wallet contains my credit cards and some cash. I also put my Samsung Galaxy tab and an important document in its right pocketthe right pocket of it and this is really important for me. Laura will be in your town on Friday and I hope you will be ableI am hoping you would be able to give her a call so that she can collect it from your house. I have given her your phone number and she will contact youshe will be contacting you soon. Thanks again for a magnificent weekend and I hope to see you soon. Warm wishes, Haksoon Paik
Why this response received Band 7.5
The letter communicates its purpose immediately, covers every requested point with specific identifying details, and maintains a warm, suitable tone. Its main limitation is presentation: placing the entire message in one paragraph weakens the otherwise clear progression, while a few awkward word choices and sentence joins reduce polish; dividing the content into purposeful paragraphs and tightening those local expressions should be the priority.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
The purpose is clear, all three bullet points are fully covered, and the friendly register is consistently appropriate.
Make the request slightly more direct by explicitly asking Steven to contact Laura and hand the coat to her.
Coherence and Cohesion
The information follows a logical sequence, but the absence of paragraph breaks makes the long letter less easy to navigate.
Use separate paragraphs for the greeting and context, the coat and belongings, and the collection arrangement.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is varied and often precise, especially in the detailed description of the coat and its contents.
Replace less natural choices such as 'detect it' with idiomatic wording such as 'spot it' or 'find it'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A good range of sentence forms is used with strong overall control, despite a few awkward constructions and comma joins.
Separate independent clauses cleanly and keep modal choices consistent, for example by revising 'I am hoping you would be able'.
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IELTS General Training Writing Task 1
You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat containing some belongings there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- tell your friend that you left the coat
- describe the coat, where you think you left it and what was inside it
- suggest how to get it back
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