Some people believe that university students are required to attend the classes. Others hold the view that going to classes should be optional for students. What is your view? Discuss.

Sample Response

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In some countries such as Russia and China, attendance in classes is compulsory at universities, whereas it is voluntary in many universities in Australia and New Zealand. I firmly believe that attending classes is important for students and should be a compulsory requirement. However, opinions could vary from case to case.

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There is no doubt that class attendancethe class attendance and the level of knowledge of a specific subject are highly correlatedhighly correlate to each other because during the lecture students can hear and see the lecturers who explain the topic as well as answer questions regarding this topic. This level of interaction positively affects students, whoimpacts students positively who can understand the topic betterunderstand better the topic after class participation. Additionally, during the lecture or tutorial teachers can explain the material more clearlyin an easier or simpler way than students could understand it from a bookthan it could be read from the book. As a result of class attendance, students will not only gain greater knowledge and a deeper understandinghave greater knowledge and have a deeper understanding of the topic but will also be ablebut also will be able to solve questions based on the topic, pass a course and use this knowledge for their future careers. Teachers who conduct classes not only talk about the subject matter, but also tell stories and share their experiencesexperience which is helpful for students to understand or remember a topic. Teachers also inspire students, give helpful guidelines and recommendrefer related books so that students can learn even better. If someone does not attend classes, he will be less likely to make friendswill less likely make friends and will miss the valuable lessons taught by the teachers. On the other hand, in some situations attending classes should not be mandatory. For example, students may be absent because of illnesssickness, jobs, family needs or the necessity to take care of children or the urgent need to be in a different place during the class time. Some of the students are forced to work and sometimes the work hours overlap with class hourscome across the class hours. For the benefitbenefits of those students, attending classes at the university level should be voluntary. Many people believe that university education is quite different fromthan pre-university level education. University studentsStudents in university level are quite maturematured and they should be free to learn things thethey way they prefer—prefer- whether in classrooms, libraries, on the internet, or through other sourcesbe it classrooms, library, the internet or some other sources. To sum up, different views exist regardingin regards to class attendance by university students. However, in my opinion, it is more beneficial for students to attend classes which will eventually help them to increase their knowledge, read more, learn more and, definitely, it will help them to prepare for their future careerscareer.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response gives a clear, nuanced view and supports both compulsory attendance and reasonable exceptions with relevant, extended points. Its main limitation is the single oversized body paragraph, which blurs the shift between the two sides, while recurring collocational and grammatical slips reduce polish. The highest-priority improvement is to separate the arguments into focused paragraphs and edit sentences for more natural word choice and cleaner grammatical control.

Band score breakdown

IELTS Writing Criteria Scores

TR

Task Response

7.5
Scoring rule

The response addresses both positions, states a clear preference for compulsory attendance, and develops relevant benefits and justified exceptions.

Next step

Clarify the policy conclusion by explaining precisely how compulsory attendance should accommodate the exceptions described.

CC

Coherence and Cohesion

6.5
Scoring rule

Ideas follow a broadly logical sequence and linking is clear, but placing both sides in one very long body paragraph weakens organisation.

Next step

Divide the body into separate paragraphs for the benefits of attendance and the case for flexibility.

LR

Lexical Resource

6.5
Scoring rule

The response uses a sufficiently broad academic vocabulary, though recurring awkward collocations reduce precision and naturalness.

Next step

Revise combinations such as refer students to related books, work hours overlap with classes, and university students are mature.

GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

6.5
Scoring rule

A range of simple and complex structures is used successfully, but article, preposition, agreement, and sentence-structure errors recur.

Next step

Edit long sentences for cleaner clause relationships and check articles and prepositions in common academic phrases.

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Some people believe that university students are required to attend the classes. Others hold the view that going to classes should be optional for students. What is your view? Discuss.

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