Using cell phones and computers made communication among people much easier. As a result, letter writing could be lost in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Sample Response

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RecentLatest technological inventions like mobile phones and computers have made communication much easier and less expensivemuch more convenient, easier and less expensive. Some people consider it a revolutionconsider it as the revolution in the communication system, while some others opine that this advancement has weakened our bondsreduced our bonding and made our relationship less personal. There is no doubtdouble that with the widespread usage of cell phones, pagers, text messages, social networking websites and Internet calling, letter writing has already become less popular but I do not agree that it will ever disappearthat this it will ever disappear.

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To begin with, letter writing is a traditional way of communication among people from different parts of the world. Even nowEven until now with the dominance of technology like email, letter writing retains its importancehas its importance and supremacy in authoritative, official and personal communication. Letter writing is still the best way to congratulate someone, write to a government office or to write to a dear friend.

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Second, it is a form of formal writingit is a formal writing and some companiesbusiness companies ask their applicants to write an application letter to measure their ability to communicate in writingcapability in communicating by means of writing. Secondly, letter writing can be a source of documentation that can be utilised as strong evidence in the court. Email fraud is common these days and someone with advancedadvance knowledge can send an email from any email address he wants. This makes an email less credible as evidenceless authoritative as strong evidence.

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In addition, people applying for fiancée visa can send love letters to the embassy as proof of the relationship to a foreign individual as additional documentation purposes. Thirdly, individuals living in remote areas of the countryside still needindividual living in a remote area of a countryside still need to write letters since the Internet is yet to be available there. The number of such areas is quite large and they rely on letter writing for communication. Thus, people prefer to use letter writing as a form of sending important messages—whether to loved ones or for business transactionsmessages- be it to love one’s or business transaction purposes. The personal touch, affection and sincerity a hand written letter can convey could not be found in an email or text message.

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Lastly, letter writing is the only way to improve someone’s writing skills. Computerised grammar and spell checking facilities are often the reason many modern-era students do not have excellent writing and grammatical command. On the other hand, the habitOn the other hand habit of letter writing enhances someone's abilityenhance someone ability to write better. It will also help them become more creative and imaginative in creating a very excellent output of writing.

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In my viewIn my point of view, letter writing will not be abolished in the futurewill not be abolishing in future because it possesses a significant importance in communication, especially in measuring the ability of individual’s writing, creativity and appropriate and clever way of writing. Letter writing is entirely beneficial in honing to become an effective communicator. The importance of letter writing in offices, courtrooms, among friends and lovers will always help it to survive.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 6.5

The response is strongest in its clear disagreement and broad range of relevant contexts in which letters may remain useful, including official, legal, personal, and remote-area communication. Its main limitation is that the argument becomes repetitive and overextended, while some claims are absolute and frequent language errors weaken precision. The highest-priority improvement is to select the strongest three reasons, develop them concisely with credible evidence, and edit grammar and collocations carefully.

Band score breakdown

IELTS Writing Criteria Scores

TR

Task Response

7.0
Scoring rule

The position is clear and supported by numerous relevant reasons and examples, although some claims are exaggerated or insufficiently substantiated.

Next step

Focus on the most convincing uses of letters and avoid absolute claims such as letter writing being the only way to improve writing skills.

CC

Coherence and Cohesion

6.0
Scoring rule

The response has a recognisable progression and clear paragraphing, but repetitive points and inconsistent sequencing labels make cohesion mechanical.

Next step

Group related official and legal uses together, remove repetition, and use a consistent sequence of main ideas.

LR

Lexical Resource

6.0
Scoring rule

There is an adequate range of vocabulary for communication and documentation, but frequent inaccurate word choices and collocations reduce naturalness.

Next step

Correct expressions such as “there is no double,” “advance knowledge,” and “will not be abolishing” with standard forms.

GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

6.0
Scoring rule

The response uses a mixture of sentence types, but recurring errors in agreement, articles, noun forms, and clause construction limit accuracy.

Next step

Check subject-verb agreement and possessive forms systematically, and simplify sentences whose multiple clauses are not securely controlled.

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IELTS Writing Task 2

Using cell phones and computers made communication among people much easier. As a result, letter writing could be lost in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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