Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change, while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sample Response
Global warming has become a moot issue among the masses. Some argue that people must attempt to combat climate change, while others consider that they should adaptconsider they should adapt accordingly. FromIn my perspective, people's efforts to combat climate changemasses combating climate change can reducepositively reduce carbon emissionsemission, control pandemics and other climate emergencies.
First off, efforts must be madeendeavors must be done by the masses to tackle climate change. It is ostensible that if people understand that their inhuman activities can put the world at risk. To elaborate, the number of vehicles run on the road and release toxic gases that mix in the air and are responsible for creating environmental hazards. So, peoplethey can use carpooling to reduce emissionsthe emission. Moreover, variations in climate cause famine and pandemicscause a dearth of famine and pandemics, increasing the mortality rate—the mortality rate increases. So, instead of deforestation, afforestation is beneficiallucrative to limit harmful environmental changescurb transformations in the environment.
On the other hand, some peoplea few masses do not have a long-term vision, which is just due to ignorance. They consider that their single action has little or no role in worseningescalating global warming. They claimThey surprise others by saying that everything will be adjusted to the changing climateaccording to changing climate. Thus, their conservative thinking exacerbatesThus their conservative thinking exacerbating the climate conditions. They do not want to bear the financial loss. They depend on businesses that bring enormous profits for them. Instead of curbing global warming, they prefer to survive in the same climatic conditions. For example, if manufacturers are told to use eco-friendly products, then they abnegate because of the slow process of earning money rather than they produce in bulk even at the cost of emission of fossil fuels.
In conclusion, Thus, it is apparent that curtailing global warming by making arduous efforts is more necessarydemanding nowadays instead of adjusting according to the changing climate conditions. Methods apart from fighting climate alterations are useless for the existence of humanity.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response has a clear opinion and a recognizable structure that separates the two views, with concrete references to transport, trees, and manufacturing. Its main limitation is that the adaptation view is portrayed narrowly and some explanations are inaccurate or difficult to follow, while frequent grammatical and word-choice problems weaken clarity. The highest-priority improvement is to explain each view objectively with logically accurate support before evaluating it.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
Both views are addressed and the writer's preference is clear, but the adaptation side is treated dismissively and several supporting claims are insufficiently logical or accurate.
Explain credible reasons for adapting to unavoidable climate effects, then compare those reasons directly with the case for prevention.
Coherence and Cohesion
The four-paragraph organization and overall movement between views are clear, though progression within paragraphs is sometimes disrupted by abrupt or weakly connected claims.
Build each body paragraph around one controlling idea and show the causal link between every example and that idea.
Lexical Resource
The response attempts a reasonably broad vocabulary, but frequent collocational and word-choice errors make expressions such as those about famine, afforestation, and manufacturing imprecise.
Use familiar, accurate environmental vocabulary and check noun-verb collocations instead of relying on uncommon words whose meanings do not fit.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A mix of simple and complex structures is attempted, but fragments, agreement errors, and malformed clauses recur and sometimes impede comprehension.
Focus on writing complete finite clauses and checking subject-verb agreement before adding complex connectors or subordinate structures.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change, while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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