Some people say children no longer need to develop handwriting skills. Others believe that handwriting is still important. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Sample Response

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With the marvel of technological progress, the process of learning and teaching hashave changed to a great extent and children todaythe modern children, most of the time, use computers to compose their essays, presentationspresentation and homework. One group of people thus think that handwriting skills for children are no longer relevant while many others disagree. In this essay, I shall discuss both aspects and include my verdict. To begin with, education systemssectors and schools in many countries have embraced the computer and the internet technology and the way of teaching and learning is no longer the same as it was in the past. For example, one of my nephews, George, who is 4 years old, hashave learned the alphabetalphabets, colours, digits and many rhymes from the internet which was unimaginable even in our era. University students prepare their assignments and thesesthesis on a computer, a plagiarism checking software initially reviews themit, the teacher assesses the answers on a computer and this process goes on with the help of technology. Professionals like journalists, writers, bloggers, programmers, bankers and so on, no longer need to write manually as computers are there for them. With more corporations going digital, the need for handwriting is shrinking rapidly. Furthermore, may of the standardised exams have their computerised version and this eliminates the needs for an excellent handwriting skill and demands the skill of typing on swipe a digital device like the computer. According to the second group of people, handwriting is still essential and no matter how much dependentdependant we become on technology, it will always be a handy ability for a person. For instance, a computer-literate persona computer literate would still be considered ignorant if he can not write something on papersomething on a paper. This group of people also opine that handwriting ability enables someone to excel in his academic studies and exams. Though some exams have become digitalised, mostdigitalised most others require us to write on a paper using a pen or pencil. Thus, to demonstrate our skills,Thus to present our skills we still need handwriting skillsthe handwriting skills. Last but not least, use of technologyuse of the technology requires electric power, devices like computers and the internet connections which are yet to be available in many parts of the world. For students in such areas, handwriting skill is a must. To conclude, a thorough analysis of the topic reflects that handwriting is still an essential skill and parents, for this reason, should focus on developing this ability among their children from anand early stage.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 6.5

The essay discusses both perspectives at length, supports them with relevant educational and practical examples, and reaches a clear judgment that handwriting remains essential. Its strongest feature is comprehensive task coverage. The main limitation is linguistic control, as frequent agreement, noun-form, and phrasing errors combine with one-block presentation to reduce polish; reorganise the views into distinct paragraphs and proofread every sentence for grammar and natural academic wording.

Band score breakdown

IELTS Writing Criteria Scores

TR

Task Response

7.5
Scoring rule

Both views are developed through relevant examples and the final opinion is clear, although some evidence for the declining need focuses on adults rather than children.

Next step

Keep every example centred on children's learning and explain more directly why digital tools either replace or complement handwriting development.

CC

Coherence and Cohesion

6.5
Scoring rule

The argument progresses clearly from the technology-based view to the case for handwriting and a conclusion, but the entire essay appears as one dense paragraph.

Next step

Use separate introduction, opposing-view, supporting-view, and conclusion paragraphs, each with a focused topic sentence.

LR

Lexical Resource

6.5
Scoring rule

The response shows a broad range of education and technology vocabulary, though recurring inaccurate word choices, forms, and collocations reduce precision.

Next step

Use natural terms such as children's education, presentations, letters of the alphabet, computer-based exams, typing or swiping, and dependent on technology.

GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

6.0
Scoring rule

A variety of complex structures is attempted and meaning remains clear, but agreement, article, plural, relative-clause, and sentence-boundary errors occur frequently.

Next step

Check subject-verb agreement throughout and divide long lists or comma-linked clauses into grammatically complete sentences.

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IELTS Writing Task 2

Some people say children no longer need to develop handwriting skills. Others believe that handwriting is still important. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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