1. When you learn a foreign language, all four skills( listening, reading, speaking, writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample Response

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It is truetruly that the priorities of following four skills including listening, reading, speaking, and writing,including ,listening reading speaking and writing are reckoned to be of equal importanceare reckoned as same importance in foreign language studying. I completely agree with this opinion. Both language inputting abilities and outputting faculties play a significant roleplay significant role in foreign language learning. Language inputting abilities such as listening and reading are very important. These abilities have a great influence onmake great influence on whether the receiverreciver can understand the content accurately which is expressed by the language userwhich express by the language user. It is the fundamental part of foreign language learning. The language inputting faculties are mainly focused on the acknowledgement of reading articles and listening to others' wordsother’s words. Whether you can understand others' meaningother’s meaning quickly and clearly reflects the controlling degrees of foreignforeigner language learners. For example, if you cannot understand the lecturer'sliterature’s pronunciation or accent in university. You may miss much knowledgemany knowledges in class which means you should maketake more effort to study after class. In another aspect, output faculties areoutputting faculties is as important as inputting said before. As the original function of language is to express personal thinking. If we do not have enough outputting abilities, language learning will lose value. Speaking hashave a close relationship to dailydialy communications. Fluent sentences and decent pronunciation can make people willing to be a good listener. Meanwhile excellent logic in words presents the speaker’s high thinking skills. Last but not least, writing usually appears in formal occasions such as lecture and academic dissertation which have high requirements forhigh prerequisite of vocabulary and grammar. People should deliberately check their expression so that they can correct the evitable mistakes in language.in. language. In conclusion ,when a foreign language learnerslearner try to improve their language ability .they should concentrate on all these four skills .more practice and accumulation can help with their learning journeyjouney.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 6.0

文章明确表达了赞同四项技能同等重要的立场,并对听说读写分别展开了论述,任务回应度较好。然而,文章存在较多词汇误用与明显的语法错误,且部分段落过渡不够连贯。建议优先提升语法准确性,规范使用复杂句式与固定搭配,以增强论证的清晰度。

Band score breakdown

IELTS Writing Criteria Scores

TR

任务回应

6.5
Scoring rule

文章完整覆盖了听说读写四项技能,清晰地表达了完全赞同的立场,并给出了切题的解释与论据。

Next step

可以更深入地论述这四项技能之间如何相互促进,以使“同等重要”的论证更加严密。

CC

连贯与衔接

6.0
Scoring rule

文章结构完整,具备基本的段落划分,但部分连接词和段落间的承接显得有些生硬或机械。

Next step

建议多使用多样的逻辑连接手段,优化段落间的过渡,使论证过程更加自然流畅。

LR

词汇资源

5.5
Scoring rule

文章尝试使用了inputting、outputting等分类词汇,但出现了如acknowledgement、controlling degrees等不地道或误用的表达。

Next step

注意积累和使用地道的搭配与学术词汇,避免为了追求高级词汇而拼凑或误用词义。

GRA

语法多样性与准确性

5.5
Scoring rule

文章包含多种句式结构,但存在较多语法错误,如主谓不一致、冠词缺失、残缺句及标点格式不规范等。

Next step

应重点加强对定语从句、主从复合句及基础时态主谓一致的检查,减少频繁出现的语法瑕疵。

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IELTS Writing Task 2

1. When you learn a foreign language, all four skills( listening, reading, speaking, writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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