We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
Sample Response
Having good co-workers makemakes our professional liveslife meaningful, whilemeaningful while bad colleagues can make our life miserable. Since people spend a considerable amount of their time in their workplaces, characteristics of their co-workers greatly affect the level of job satisfaction. Friendly behaviour, team spirit, helpfulness and professionalism are some important qualities that make someone a great colleague. To begin with, friendly behaviour in an employeefriendly behaviours of an employee makeswould make things easier for other workers. When someone joins a company, the first thing they look for among their colleagueshe looks for among his colleagues is friendly behaviouris the friendly behaviours. Second, team spirit is another important aspect that makesthe make workers' livesworker's life easier in a company. Without it, some employees would struggle to producesuffer greatly to produce the expected output. This is why companies these days look for this trait in employeesamong the employees. Third, helpfulness of an employee makes other employees' lives a lot easierthe life of other employees lot easier. A helpful colleague would share his knowledge, help finish a project and be amiable to othersand amiable to others. For instance, during my three years professional life, I have always liked the people who have offered a helping handraised their helping hands whenever needed. My experience taught me that those are good people to rely on. Finally, professionalismthe professionalism is a quality that drives people to work closely to attain a common goal. Thus such peoplethose sorts of people would value others' opinionsothers opinion, criticism and feedback. They would also advise junior employees and guide themadvise junior employees and would guide them in difficult times. Alfred Stuart, a former colleague of mine, was highly professionalhad a great professionalism and that is why he was reliable, a great team leaderlead and a person to seek advice. All things considered, good qualities like friendliness, helpful mentality, professional attitude and team spirit among co-workers make our working environment healthy and enhances our job satisfaction.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response’s strongest feature is its clear selection of four relevant qualities, with personal examples illustrating helpfulness and professionalism. Its main limitation is that the whole essay appears as one paragraph, while friendliness and team spirit receive only brief, repetitive explanations. The highest priority is to organise the qualities into focused paragraphs and develop each one through a specific workplace situation that demonstrates its practical value.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The response directly identifies important co-worker qualities and gives relevant reasons and examples, although development is uneven across the four traits.
Add a concrete workplace example for friendliness or team spirit and explain the effect on collaboration or productivity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The numbered sequence makes the progression easy to follow, but the absence of paragraph breaks and repetitive transitions substantially weaken organisation.
Create an introduction, two body paragraphs grouping related qualities, and a conclusion, with each paragraph built around a clear central idea.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is adequate for workplace qualities and relationships, but repetition and several awkward collocations reduce precision and flexibility.
Use natural alternatives for phrases such as ‘friendly behaviours’, ‘helpful mentality’, ‘raised their helping hands’, and ‘a great professionalism’.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A mix of sentence forms is used, but frequent errors in articles, agreement, possessives, and parallel structure remain noticeable.
Check each noun phrase and verb sequence, especially ‘an aspect that makes workers’ lives’ and ‘share knowledge, help, and be amiable’.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
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