Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample Response
As millions of people and organisations of all stripes can post information on the Internet, fewer people deemmore people don’t deem the content they see online accurate. However, there is still credible information on the Internet, which is harder to findharder to be ferreted out. It is understandable that people desire to be focused on, especially those who want to become stars, the Internet is the most effective way to make this happen. Thus, thisThus this drives many of them to sharespread their personal information to attract more viewers so that one day their talents may receive attentiontheir gifts may be paid attention to. Some business organisations alsoAlso, for some business organisations, they usually create exaggerated advertisements to promotepropagate their products, although their productswhile actually, their products are not as good as the advertisements claimas perfect as the advertisements described. On the other hand, in some repressive regimes, media is closely tied to the government. Media outlets provide information not for the well-being of civilians but for the propaganda of the regime so that they can control the regime for their own interests. However, all that criticismall those critics of Internet information doesdo not mean that there is little reliable information. After all, there are people telling lies out of their personal interests, there are definitely a large group of people being against lies and keeping digging the truth, though. Therefore, the aim of those authoritative organisations and individuals posting information isthe target that those authoritative organisations and individuals posting their information is, to tell the truth and clarify mattersto tell the truth, and clear the clouds, thereby making their informationwhich makes their information accurate and reliable. After all, in athe world with diverse cultures and races, it is impossible to guarantee that all information isguarantee all information being objectively accurate. All we should do is to keep a clear head and become more effective at distinguishingbecome more efficient to sort out the accurate information from harmful falsehoodsthose detrimentally false so that we can make impartial judgmentsstand on the impartial side.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response takes a sensible qualified position, recognising substantial online misinformation while rejecting the claim that most information is necessarily inaccurate. Its strongest material identifies commercial exaggeration and political propaganda, but the reasoning is uneven, the celebrity discussion is only loosely relevant, and the single-block structure compounds frequent language errors. Prioritise a clear thesis followed by separate evidence-based paragraphs on unreliable and credible sources.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
A relevant qualified position emerges and several sources of unreliable information are discussed, but support is uneven and partly tangential.
State the extent of disagreement explicitly and compare concrete evidence from an unreliable source with a credible one.
Coherence and Cohesion
The response moves broadly from misinformation to reliable content, but the single paragraph, unclear contrasts, and run-on links weaken progression.
Use separate paragraphs for the position, misinformation sources, credible sources, and conclusion, with accurate contrast signals.
Lexical Resource
There is enough range to discuss media, commerce, and credibility, though many awkward collocations reduce precision.
Refine phrases such as 'be focused on', 'gifts may be paid attention to', 'keeping digging', and 'stand on the impartial side'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A range of structures is attempted, but frequent run-ons, clause errors, agreement problems, and awkward passive forms reduce clarity.
Separate independent clauses into complete sentences and check subject-verb agreement before adding subordinate clauses.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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