Under the British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant’s past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion.

Sample Response

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It is believed, and rightly so, that a person learns from his past and improves his future conductmakes his future bright by correcting the mistakes committed in the past. Due to this, a person should not be judged, as a whole, by his past deeds only. Therefore, due weightDue the weightage must be accorded to the present circumstances in which the person commits an act, which may either alter the interpretation of the actgive a positive or a negative result.

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Different nations across the globe have different sets of rulesa different set of rules in respect of criminal cases that come before a jurycome across the jury of eachsuch nation. The jury under the British and Australian laws has no access tono access as regards the past criminal record of a defendant. This provides an edge to the defendant, as the jury comes to a decision based on evidence for the current chargedecision in a vacuum. Moreover, in the absence ofin absence of previous criminal records the jury does not arrive at a decision due to any biasbiasedness or pre-conceived notion about the character of the defendant. This situation, undoubtedly, favours the defendant.

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However, another school of thought believes that the jury must be aware of the past criminal records of the defendant. According to the believers of this school, access toan access to the past criminal records, actually provides a factual, realistic and reasonable platform to the jury to deliver their judgment. The past records, as a matter of fact, provides insightprovides the insight into nature, character, upbringing, social level, mental health and numerous other factors of the defendant. With the help of these tools, it becomes easy and logical for the jury to assess patterns of relevant past behaviourread the subconscious mind of such defendant. Moreover, it also facilitates the jury to take a reasoned, well-informed decisionwell defined, appropriate, conscious, deliberate, judicious and prudent decision.

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As a matter of fact, in the recent case of a known gangster that made headlines in the criminal magazine, The ABC, it was only due to the knowledge of the modus operandiknowledge of modus operandi of the said gangster in past records, that the jury overruled the theory of reasonable doubt that was created by the defence lawyerillusioned by the advocate of the defendant.

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In short, in my opinion, the jury must be made aware of the past records to provide them the opportunity to have a full 360-degree view of the defendant, as a whole.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 6.5

The response discusses both legal approaches and gives a clear preference for disclosing prior records, with logical paragraphing and an attempt at supporting evidence. Its persuasiveness is limited by speculative claims about reading a defendant's mind, an unverified example and frequent legal collocation errors; the priority is to weigh prejudice against evidential relevance using cautious, precise reasoning and a credible hypothetical example.

Band score breakdown

IELTS Writing Criteria Scores

TR

Task Response

6.5
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The task is addressed with relevant content, but key details or reasoning need fuller precision.

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Develop the main features or claims with exact, verifiable support.

CC

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0
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The response has a clear overall structure, though local progression can be more precise.

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Use explicit, economical sequencing and remove repetition.

LR

Lexical Resource

6.0
Scoring rule

Vocabulary is sufficient for the task, but several collocations or word choices are inaccurate.

Next step

Replace awkward combinations with standard academic or task-specific phrasing.

GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

6.0
Scoring rule

A range of forms is attempted, but recurring grammar errors reduce accuracy.

Next step

Proofread agreement, articles, prepositions and clause structure.

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IELTS Writing Task 2

Under the British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant’s past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion.

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