In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak this language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Sample Response
Culture and language are often tightly connected and one represents another. So, I quite agree with the viewpoint that to learn a language really well, someone has to learn about the country where this language is spoken and without knowing the cultural, historical and people’s lifestyles, someone cannot truly master a language.
We learn our mother tongue from our surroundings, parents, teachers, and relatives and through life experience without reading books or attending classes. We know when to use an expression and when to use sarcasm, then when to shorten a vocabulary and when to avoid a word. This all seems natural to us only because we have learned it from our experience, not from books. Similarly, when learning a foreign language, we must learn about the people and their lifestyles in order to properly learn this language. For instance, I had many Spanish-speaking friends in my school and I had three courses in this language. I am capable of communicating in Spanish and expressing my ideas but if someone asks me how far I know about this language, I would say almost nothing. This is because I do not know the cultural and historical aspects of the Spanish people that well.
Moreover, people learn to communicate in a different language when they migrate to a different country without formal language learning training. I personally know many who can speak English fluently after they had migrated and stayed in an English Speaking country for a while. Since they had exposure to the culture, people’s lifestyles and environment of an English-speaking country, they learned the language very well.
Thus knowledge about a country, its citizens, history, lifestyle, cultural and traditional aspects are quite important to learn the language spoken there. We learn better by doing something than reading about it and this is also true while learning a language as well. A language is better learned when we know about the people and the country who own it.
IELTS Writing Correction
- 1. Clarify reciprocal link Original: one represents another Suggested revision: each influences the other Why it matters: The replacement expresses the two-way relationship between culture and language accurately.
- 2. Use formal connector Original: So, I quite agree Suggested revision: Therefore, I agree Why it matters: “Therefore” creates a more formal logical link to the preceding claim.
- 3. Use concise subject Original: someone has to learn Suggested revision: learners must learn Why it matters: The replacement avoids the vague repeated pronoun “someone.”
- 4. Fix parallel list Original: the cultural, historical and people’s lifestyles Suggested revision: the culture, history, and lifestyles of the people Why it matters: The revised nouns form a grammatically parallel list.
- 5. Maintain plural reference Original: someone Suggested revision: they Why it matters: “They” refers naturally to the plural “learners” introduced earlier.
- 6. Use natural phrase Original: life Suggested revision: everyday Why it matters: The replacement describes ordinary language exposure more naturally.
- 7. Coordinate the sequence Original: sarcasm, then when Suggested revision: sarcasm, when Why it matters: The list already begins with “when,” so “then” disrupts the parallel sequence.
- 8. Correct vocabulary meaning Original: shorten a vocabulary Suggested revision: shorten an expression Why it matters: “Vocabulary” denotes a body of words and cannot be shortened as a single expression can.
- 9. Fix demonstrative order Original: This all seems natural Suggested revision: All this seems natural Why it matters: “All this” is the standard ordering for the demonstrative phrase.
- 10. Avoid repeated learn Original: properly learn this language Suggested revision: master it Why it matters: The replacement removes repetition and preserves the intended meaning.
- 11. Use natural location phrase Original: friends in my school Suggested revision: friends at school Why it matters: “At school” is the conventional phrase for this context.
- 12. Use correct course verb Original: had Suggested revision: took Why it matters: Students “take” courses rather than “have” them in this sense.
Suggested Rewrites
- one represents another each influences the other
- So, I quite agree Therefore, I agree
- someone has to learn learners must learn
- the cultural, historical and people’s lifestyles the culture, history, and lifestyles of the people
- someone they
- life everyday
Why this response received Band 7.5
The essay sustains a clear position and develops it through relevant contrasts between natural first-language learning, formal study, and cultural immersion, supported by personal examples. Its principal limitation is that some claims are too absolute and several expressions are imprecise, especially the suggestion that cultural knowledge is identical to language mastery. Prioritise qualifying the central claim and explaining more precisely how cultural context improves pragmatic meaning, idiom, and appropriate language use.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The position is clear throughout and supported by relevant, extended examples, although the argument sometimes equates cultural knowledge too completely with language proficiency.
Acknowledge that grammar and vocabulary can be learned formally while arguing that cultural knowledge is essential for nuanced and context-appropriate mastery.
Coherence and Cohesion
Paragraphing is purposeful and ideas progress logically from first-language acquisition to personal experience and immersion, with only some repetition.
Reduce repeated statements that culture helps language learning and use the conclusion to synthesise the mechanisms rather than restate the thesis.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is varied enough to discuss culture, immersion, communication, and experience, but several collocations and word forms are unnatural.
Use shorten a word or expression, formal instruction, cultural context, and the communities that speak it instead of less precise phrases.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A broad range of complex structures is generally controlled, though agreement, parallelism, tense, and modifier errors remain noticeable.
Correct structures such as cultural and historical knowledge and knowledge of people’s lifestyles, and use the simple past consistently in personal examples.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak this language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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