People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
Sample Response
For natural reasonsDue to the natural reasons, people find it difficult to change the ways they live. It is quite difficult for a majority of people to alter theirthe state of mind, the way they think and the environment to which they are accustomedthe environment they get used to. Therefore several problems can occur when they are told to do and solve their issues in easier and more appropriatedecent ways. In my opinion, obvious solutions lie in consulting psychologistssolutions knock the door of psychologists and also family members and relatives should play a roleact in these positions. Changes in some cases are inevitable and embracing new ideas and ways of life bringsembracing the new idea and way of life bring many opportunities and hence accepting new things is often not optionalaccepting new things are often not options, but mandatory for us. In modern life, people adjust to different habits and routines and then they do not tend to become willing to changeget involved to change their usual activities. By doing this, they decline any other offer presented by those around thempresented by surroundings, especially when these offers are from ones that they do not like. Because of that their resistance to change increasesresistance increases in not changing. For example, when a parent asks their child not to be disobedientasked their kid to not do disobedience or not eat chocolate too much, this kid's persistence in the matter sometimes intensifies the more the parents insistenhances as far as parents ask. That's why the most difficult problem isthe worst and most difficult of the problem is the resistance of children's unruly behaviour. If these issues are not undertaken by someone responsible and coped with the problem, its consequences persist throughout the child's lifestay to the rest of child's life vitally. New ideas, technology and changes are often for better ways of life. Not being able to grasp new ideas and changesgrip the new idea and changes can bring personal and social problems. Parents who cannot embrace the idea of modernization and generation gaps often have bitter experience with their children. Changes in society are also natural with time and the old way life will not remain forever. New ideas often come to people with open and broader perspective. Old traditions have their importance but new customs, ideas and changes should also be accepted for the overall betterment of the society. A healthy family and social relationship, use of technology, guidance and mutual understanding people of different generations can minimise this problem to a great extent. It is natural that old people will not easily accept the radical changes of ideas, values and way of life. New generations should talk to them, discuss them and present the good sides of the changes they have accepted. To conclude, it is best to consult these overwhelming behaviours to an expert for the sake of the welfare of both the people and the society. By the help of modern psychology I do not think of a problem unsolved, and besides this is a crucial problem for a society that comprised of healthy-thinking people.
Why this response received Band 5.5
The response recognises both parts of the task and offers potentially useful solutions through family communication, guidance, and professional help. Its main limitation is that the discussion is diffuse: problems are often asserted vaguely, the child-behaviour example distracts from the wider issue, and frequent language errors sometimes obscure meaning. Prioritise a clear problems-and-solutions structure with specific causal explanations and more controlled sentences.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
Both problems and solutions are addressed, but several ideas are vague, repetitive, or insufficiently connected to resistance to life changes.
Select two clearly defined problems and pair each with a feasible solution, explaining the cause, consequence, and likely result.
Coherence and Cohesion
There is a discernible movement from problems toward solutions, but the single long paragraph, repetition, and abrupt shifts weaken progression.
Organise the response into an introduction, focused problem paragraphs, matched solution paragraphs, and a concise conclusion with clear topic sentences.
Lexical Resource
The response attempts a fairly broad vocabulary, but frequent inaccurate collocations and word choices make several statements awkward or unclear.
Use simpler, established combinations such as seek professional help, accept new ideas, and experience generational conflict instead of forcing unfamiliar expressions.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Some complex structures are attempted, but frequent errors in agreement, articles, prepositions, verb patterns, and sentence construction sometimes impede clarity.
Build shorter complete sentences first, then check each clause for a subject, a correctly formed verb, and accurate linking before combining ideas.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
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