You and your friend have planned a trip together. Write a letter to your friend to remind them about the trip. In your letter: - Remind them of the trip dates and destination. - Explain what they need to prepare. - Suggest a meeting point or time for departure.
Sample Response
Hi [Name], I hopeI hope you’re as excited about the upcoming trip as I am! Just a quick reminder that we’re meeting at the train station this Friday at 8 a.m. sharp. Don’t forget to bring your ID and yourthe train ticket!
As for packing, make sure to include comfortable clothingclothes and hiking shoes—we’ll be exploring the mountains quite a bit. Don’t forget a jacket, as the weather can get chilly in the evenings. Also, I’ll be bringing snacks and a camera, so you don’t have to worry about those.
Let me know if there’s anything specific you’d like to bring along. I can’t wait to spend the weekend with you. It’s going to be an unforgettable adventure!
See you soon, Lucas
Why this response received Band 7.0
The letter is easy to follow, appropriately friendly, and uses accurate, varied language while covering preparation and departure arrangements clearly. Its main limitation is task achievement: at 121 words, it is substantially under length, and the destination and trip dates are only briefly identified. The highest priority is to add specific destination and schedule details, then develop the practical preparations and departure plan without losing the concise, natural tone.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
The purpose and all three bullet points are recognisable, but the response is 29 words short and gives only brief destination and date detail.
Add a precise destination and fuller schedule information, then extend the preparation and departure details beyond the minimum length.
Coherence and Cohesion
The response progresses logically through the trip reminder, preparation advice, and friendly closing, with well-managed paragraphing.
Strengthen the progression further by placing the date and destination together before moving to packing and departure arrangements.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is varied and natural for an informal letter, including precise travel and weather language, with only minor repetition.
Broaden the travel vocabulary in a longer response so repeated phrases such as reminders and things to bring are expressed more flexibly.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A good range of simple and complex structures is used accurately, and punctuation remains well controlled throughout.
Maintain this accuracy in a longer response while using a wider range of clause structures for reminders and suggestions.
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IELTS General Training Writing Task 1
You and your friend have planned a trip together. Write a letter to your friend to remind them about the trip. In your letter:
- Remind them of the trip dates and destination.
- Explain what they need to prepare.
- Suggest a meeting point or time for departure.
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