The graphs below show the global robotics market during 2000 and 2025 based on sectors.
Sample Response
The diagrams give data on the global market of robotics in billions of dollarsin billion dollars from 2000 to 2025, including projections for the later yearsfrom 2000 and give predictions until the year 2025. Overall, the market for robotics will grow significantlywill significantly progress over the period shownin the coming years and the industrial sectorits industrial use will be the largest sectorpredominant. According to the bar chart, worldwide robotics business in 2000 was less than 10 billion dollars and in the next decade, it almost trebled. The size of the global robotics marketThe outreach of robotics in the global market is predicted to exceedgo higher than about 42 billion dollars in 202040 billion in 2020. Finally, in 2025, this is estimated to jump to approximately 70 billion dollars. As the table data suggests, personal use of robotics was negligibleignorable in 2000 but it reachedreached to 4 billion dollars in 2015. It is forecastforecasted that personal use of robotics technology will reachgo as high as 9 billion dollars in 2025. Commercial use is also expected to rise torise and expand to 16 billion dollars in 2025, at which point2025 at which point industrial use of robotics would be the highest, 26 billion dollars to be exact. Finally, military use of this technology was 2 billion dollars in 2000 and it is projected to be 15 billion in 2025.
Why this response received Band 7.0
The response gives a clear overview and selects accurate figures from both visuals, especially the strong overall growth and the dominance of industrial robotics. Its main limitation is that comparisons are rather sparse and a few expressions are imprecise, including the claim that the market almost trebled by 2010. Prioritise clearer cross-year and cross-sector comparisons while using more natural data-description vocabulary and distinct paragraphs.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
A clear overview and generally accurate key figures address both visuals, though some stages and comparisons are omitted and the 2000-2010 increase is overstated.
Compare more intermediate years and sector trajectories directly, and describe the rise from about 8 to 15 billion as nearly doubling rather than trebling.
Coherence and Cohesion
The information follows a sensible overview-to-detail sequence, but presenting the whole report as one paragraph weakens the visible organisation.
Separate the overview, total-market trend, and sector breakdown into clearly focused paragraphs while reducing repeated use of "Finally".
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is sufficiently varied for the task, but several choices such as "outreach," "ignorable," and "reached to" are unnatural or imprecise.
Use conventional chart language such as "market size," "negligible," "rose to," and "is projected to reach".
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A useful mix of simple and complex structures is generally well controlled, with only occasional errors in prepositions, reference, and sentence construction.
Refine preposition and clause control, especially in phrases such as "from 2000" and "reached 4 billion dollars," to make the report consistently accurate.
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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1
The graphs below show the global robotics market during 2000 and 2025 based on sectors.
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