The graph and table below show the number of fishers in millions for different regions in 1980, 1990, and 2000, and the world's top exporters of fish in 2000.
Sample Response
The column graph gives the number of fishers in five different regions in three years:in three decades- 1980, 1990 and 2000, while the table listslists down the world’sglobally top ten fish exporting countries in 2000. Overall, the number of fishermen in Asia soared over the period and Thailand, Norway and the USA werewas the top three fish exporters in 2000. Now turning to the details, there were nearly 9 million fishers in Asia in 1980 which was almost double than the combined number of fishers in Africa, America and Europe. The number of fishers in AsiaAsian population who lived on fishing increased by roughly four million in the next decade while marginal growth occurreda marginal growth could be observed in the other regionsin the case of other areas except in Europe, whereexcept in Europe where the number of fishers actually dropped. In 1990, fishers number in Africa, South America, North America and Europe was less than a million and during the next decade, these numbers remained almost the same except in Europe that witnessed a fractional jump. By contrastOn the contrary, the number of fishermen in Asia rose dramaticallydramatically upsurged and stood at just over 23 million, which23 million which was far higher thanoverwhelmingly greater than the number of fishers in other parts of the world. The table showspresents that, in 2000, Thailand was the top exporter of fish globally and the second and third positionsposition onof this list were held by Norway and the USA Deletedespite their remarkably fewer number of fishermen than Asia. The fourth, seventh and tenth positions of the top ten fish exporting countries were occupied by four Asian countries while the rest were held by other non-Asian countries.
Why this response received Band 6.5
The response identifies the dominant rise in Asian fishers and accurately names the three leading exporters, while maintaining a generally clear progression from the graph to the table. However, several supporting comparisons misread the visuals, especially the regional values in 1990 and the positions held by Asian exporters. The priority is to check every quantitative statement against both visuals and report fewer, fully accurate comparisons in more controlled language.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
The main trends and leading exporters are identified, but several details are inaccurate, including the 1990 regional figures and Asian rankings.
Verify values and ranks directly, noting that Africa and South America exceed one million in 1990 and Indonesia is ninth.
Coherence and Cohesion
The response moves logically from an overview to the regional graph and then the exporter table, with generally clear progression.
Use distinct paragraphs for the overview and details, and avoid mechanical signposting such as 'Now turning to the details'.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary for change and comparison is varied, but some expressions are unnatural, including 'fishers number' and 'dramatically upsurged'.
Prefer precise collocations such as 'the number of fishers rose sharply' and 'the table shows'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Complex structures are used with some control, although agreement, article, comparison, and relative-clause errors occur repeatedly.
Check subject-verb agreement and plural forms, then simplify comparison sentences to reduce avoidable grammatical errors.
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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1
The graph and table below show the number of fishers in millions for different regions in 1980, 1990, and 2000, and the world's top exporters of fish in 2000.
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