Your neighbour keeps a pet in the garden, which causes some problems for you. You have decided to write to this neighbour about the problems. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: - say who you are and why you are writing this letter - explain the problems - suggest how to solve the problems
Sample Response
Dear Blake,
I am Barry Sanders, your neighbour at number 25your neighbour of house 25, writing this letter to talk about the dog that you keep in your garden. I own a dog, and you can understand that I love pets. But your dog is causing some problems for us. And I waited for more than a few weeks before writing this letter.
Your dog "Tom" is a nice pet, and when you are around, he creates little commotion to disturb anybody. But you travel a lot and giveconfer the responsibility to your friend Hadden to take care of the dog when you are away. However, I do not think that Hadden is doing a decent job. Tom is often left alone without adequate food or waterwith no adequate food and water, resulting in hisher excessive barking, which disturbs me and almost everyone inaround the neighbourhood. Hadden does not even come to see the dog and refill the food and water bowlsfood and drink pots every day. As a result, Tom barks even more in the early morning when the food or drink pot is empty.
Therefore, I would like to suggest that you ask Hadden to come and look after Tom every day and make sure he is taken care of properly. This will be helpful for your pet as well as us. Please give me a call when you get back from your vacation. We will discuss this further.
Yours sincerely,
Barry Sanders
Why this response received Band 7.5
The letter responds fully and tactfully, with a clear explanation of the barking problem and a practical request that benefits both the dog and the neighbours. Its main weakness is linguistic polish: several expressions are unnatural, and shifting between “her” and “he” for Tom distracts from an otherwise coherent message. Prioritise consistent reference and more idiomatic phrasing so the detailed content reads as smoothly as it is organised.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
All three bullet points are fully addressed with relevant detail, a clear purpose, and an appropriately courteous tone for a neighbour.
State the desired outcome even more directly by asking for reliable daily care whenever the neighbour is away.
Coherence and Cohesion
The response is logically sequenced into clear functional paragraphs, and cohesive links guide the reader effectively through problem and solution.
Reduce the repeated sentence-initial use of “But”, “However”, and “As a result” to make the progression more seamless.
Lexical Resource
The vocabulary shows good range and conveys the situation clearly, although several choices such as “confer the responsibility” and “drink pots” are unnatural.
Use more idiomatic combinations such as “entrust the care” and “water bowl” to improve precision and naturalness.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Complex sentences are generally well controlled, but pronoun inconsistency and several awkward constructions remain noticeable.
Keep references to Tom consistently masculine and revise clauses such as “no adequate food and water” into fully natural grammatical forms.
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IELTS General Training Writing Task 1
Your neighbour keeps a pet in the garden, which causes some problems for you. You have decided to write to this neighbour about the problems. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter:
- say who you are and why you are writing this letter
- explain the problems
- suggest how to solve the problems
Your response
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