You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: - give details of your visit to the restaurant - explain the reason for the celebration - say what was good about the food and the service
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to express my satisfaction with the excellent service and high quality of food that your restaurant provided us last Sunday, on the occasion of my 30th birthday. We were a party of fifteen, which included my family, close friends and colleagues from work.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know how pleased I and my friends are after celebrating my friend’s 27th birthday at your restaurant. By the way, we were planning to celebrate my friend’s birthday at another place, but we had to change our plan at the eleventh hour for some reason.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my appreciation for the outstanding dining experience my friends and I had at 'The Keg Steakhouse & Bar' in Toronto last Friday evening. We had gathered to celebrate my best friend’s 25th birthday, and your restaurant played a significant role in making the occasion truly memorable.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my utter satisfaction and admiration regarding the outstanding food and service we have enjoyed in your restaurant, “La-Italiano”, last Sunday. Thank you for making our event special.