Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sample Response
Masses are changing according to the environment needs. In the pastIn the past time, all people preferred to spend their lives doing the same things while only a handful of people did not prefer it. However, nowadays fewer people now belong to the former categorythe former category is lower in number. All people especially youngsters prefer to change and they expect the changes would be enjoyable and for better. Firstly, these daysin these days only the younger generation givesonly young generation give a strong preference for changefull preference to changes in most of the cases. They embrace changes and think that changes will make their liveslife meaningful. Secondly, changes create new opportunities which make us leap forward. A new job, for instance, might present challenges that push the person to adapt, acquire new knowledge, or add to their skill set. Thirdly, a change can represent a break with the past and an old routine which has become boring and predictable. Finally, as well as making life more fun and interesting, new experiences can be good for our physical and mental health. We find that changes can make us more experienced and capablemake us experienced and valuable. On the flip side of the coin, older peoplepeople like old generation avoid changes in many cases because they do not want to become materialistic. They believe that people shouldThey opine we should give our full attention to one thing and to traditional ways of livingto the old way of traditional living. They mainly avoid major changes and thus remain on thea safe side while missing many opportunities that these changes might have broughtthat the changes might have bought. They do not want to step outside their comfort zone and prefer to followcomfort zone, prefer following their daily habits. They feel satisfied with their circumstance. Perhaps they feel that a routine gives them structure, maybe they are not fond of surprises or confident enough to face new challenges. They believebelieved that staying secure and maintaining the current circumstance is the best way to live more safelylive life safer. To put it in a nutshell, both sidesside seem to have their own merits. However, I am also persuadedI also persuaded that change is unavoidable and necessary if someone wants to keep up withwit thea fast pace of modern life. Even if some people maintain a form of stability by following a routine, the world keeps spinning and evolving.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response’s strongest feature is its broad coverage of why people embrace change and why others value routine, ending with a clear preference for adapting to modern life. Its main limitation is that one-paragraph presentation and frequent grammatical and collocational errors weaken the comparison; the highest-priority improvement is to organise the two views into separate paragraphs and develop each through balanced, precise explanations rather than generational generalisations.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
Both views are addressed with several relevant reasons and the conclusion gives a clear opinion, although some points rely on broad stereotypes or limited explanation.
Develop a fairer comparison by explaining genuine benefits and costs of both stability and change across different age groups.
Coherence and Cohesion
The movement from benefits of change to reasons for routine and then the opinion is understandable, but one long paragraph and mechanical sequencing weaken organisation.
Use separate introduction, viewpoint, and conclusion paragraphs with topic sentences that signal the purpose of each section.
Lexical Resource
There is enough vocabulary to discuss opportunity, routine, security, and adaptation, but recurrent inaccurate combinations and word forms limit control.
Correct phrases such as “the younger generation,” “on the safe side,” “satisfied with their circumstances,” and “convinced that.”
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The response attempts varied sentence forms, but frequent agreement, article, tense, and clause-boundary errors remain noticeable throughout.
Check subject–verb agreement and articles systematically, then separate comma-spliced ideas into complete sentences.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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