Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in the sub-continental countries. What do you think are the reasons behind this?
Sample Response
Cricket, without any double, is the most popular game in sub-continent countries like India, Srilanka, Bangladesh, Pakistan, Nepal and this popularity is so bulging that many nations in this part of the world know better about cricket than they do about their national games. Strange as it might seemStrange it might seem, but it is a fact that less than 10% of peopleless than 10% people are interested in their national gamesgame while more than 90% people consider cricket their passionconsider cricket as their passion in those countries. There are several reasons for this popularityreasons for that and among them historical, anthropological, colonial, political, commercial and geographical reasons are the most substantial reasonsare most substantial reasons for this. Cricket was introduced to the subcontinentintroduced to this sub-continent by the English and because of their colonies in this part of Asiapart of the Asia, people became politically interestedpolitically got interested in this game. Like many other things that people adopted from the English, cricket was no exception. Later, cricket becameLater this became a popular game because people easily accepted it as an exciting sport and started playing itstarted participating in this game. For geographical reasonsBecause of geographical reason, people started doing better in this game and they found themselvesthem to be good at a widely played sporta sport which is widely accepted. More than 180 crore people inhabit in this part of the world and that made it a commercially hot spot for spreading the game and ICC found it to be a great part in increasing the popularity of the game. Among the 10 test playing nations, 4 nations are from this sub-continent and it is natural that people would prefer a game that they play at World Cup levelparticipate in world cup level. Apart from the political, commercial and colonial reasonsreason, people of this part are naturally good at this sport and the world has seen many great players who came from this part. The mass media also contributed toin making this game popular and there are several sports channels in this region that exclusively broadcast cricket all day long.
It is inevitable that people would participate in sports that they are good at, which they enjoy and have international renown and that’s why the national and traditional games, which are scarcely known to the rest of the world, have lost their popularity while the cricket has acclaimed its own rights to the people of this sub-continent area.
Why this response received Band 6.5
The response’s strongest feature is its breadth, identifying colonial history, commercial incentives, international success and mass-media exposure as reasons for cricket’s popularity. Its main limitation is that claims about geography and people being naturally better at cricket are asserted rather than explained, while most content is compressed into one oversized paragraph. Prioritise grouping the strongest causes into separate paragraphs and supporting each with a clear causal explanation.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The essay answers the question with several relevant reasons, but some listed causes are vague, repetitive, or unsupported by explanation.
Focus on colonial legacy, international achievement, commercial investment, and media coverage, explaining precisely how each increases participation and audience interest.
Coherence and Cohesion
The response has a discernible progression and a concluding paragraph, but the long body block combines too many causes without clear internal grouping.
Use separate paragraphs for historical roots, competitive success and commercial or media reinforcement, each led by a focused topic sentence.
Lexical Resource
The vocabulary range is sufficient for historical, commercial, and sporting discussion, though frequent inaccurate collocations undermine precision.
Replace expressions such as “without any double,” “popularity is so bulging,” and “commercially hot spot” with natural equivalents.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Both simple and complex forms are attempted, but recurring errors in articles, plurals, agreement, prepositions, and pronoun reference are noticeable.
Revise noun phrases and verb patterns, especially “people inhabit this region,” “at World Cup level,” and “contributed to making the game popular.”
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in the sub-continental countries. What do you think are the reasons behind this?
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