Some people think men and women have different natural abilities that make them suitable for different types of work. Others, however, believe that both men and women can be equally suited to do any type of work. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sample Response
Whether men and women have equal capacity to do any job or the type of work they do should be based on their physical characteristicsnatural features and inherent abilities is a widely debated issue. While some believe that both genders have an equal aptitude to do any sort of work, others disagreeothers, however, deny it. This essay delves into the issue and then drawsdraw a sensible conclusion. A group of people argueopine that men and women are not very different physicallynot physically much different. FurthermoreApart from that, men and women possess the same natural abilities, thinking patterns, emotions, needs and instincts. Since women are largely confined to the homekept mostly inside houses, they react differently fromthan men in variousdifferent situations. If both men and women are given equal opportunitiesopportunity and experience, they can both handle any job with the same efficiency. Thus, this group deniesthis group of people deny that any particular gender is better prepared for a job than the otheropposite gender. For example, they say that in the past, women were deprived of education, employmentjob and other social activities, and because of that, the number of women in higher corporate positions was lowerfewer than it is todaythan that of today's number. Another group, however, maintains thatremains strict to the fact that men and women have different physical and mental capacities and these differences make each genderthese capacities make them more suitable for different professionsdifferent types of professions. For instance, a woman is a natural caregiver and hence nursing is a more suitable profession for her. On the contrary construction works, one example of such many professions is suitable for men. In conclusion, tasks for men and women are determined mostly by their natural abilities and this is a natural law. Denying it would not be a good idea and in my opinion, no task is less important and thus distinctive professions makes them perform better.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response considers both perspectives and eventually states a preference for work aligned with perceived natural abilities. Its main limitation is uneven and stereotyped development: broad claims about women as caregivers and men in construction are not critically supported, while the final position is awkwardly expressed. Prioritise developing evidence-based examples and stating a precise, defensible opinion from the introduction onward.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
Both views are addressed and an opinion appears in the conclusion, but support is uneven, generalised, and sometimes based on unsupported gender stereotypes.
State the position in the introduction and support it with nuanced examples showing how individual ability, training, and job requirements interact.
Coherence and Cohesion
The argument follows a basic sequence from one view to the other and then the conclusion, but the single-paragraph format weakens organisation.
Create distinct introduction, two-view, opinion, and conclusion paragraphs with explicit central ideas and logical links.
Lexical Resource
The response has adequate vocabulary for ability and employment, though frequent inaccurate collocations and repetitive gender references limit precision.
Replace phrases such as “remain strict to the fact” and “construction works” with “maintain that” and “construction work.”
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Simple and complex forms are mixed, but frequent agreement, article, punctuation, and clause-structure errors sometimes make meaning difficult to follow.
Focus on complete sentence structures and agreement, especially in the construction example and the final opinion sentence.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Some people think men and women have different natural abilities that make them suitable for different types of work. Others, however, believe that both men and women can be equally suited to do any type of work. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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