Nowadays famous people are photographed by professional photographers everywhere they go. Some people say this is a good thing because the public are interested in their lives. Other people think that photographers are wrong to follow famous people. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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IELTS Writing Correction

• 1. 抄袭题目 Original: Nowadays famous people are photographed by professional photographers everywhere they go. Suggested revision: 删除 Why it matters: 请勿直接复制题目文本，这不会被计入字数，也无法获得分数。
• 2. 无原创内容 Suggested revision: 请重新写一篇完整的议论文，包含引言段、主体段和结论段，字数不少于250字。 Why it matters: 本段完全复制了题目，无法进行有效批改。
• 3. 请勿抄袭题目 Suggested revision: 请重新提交您自己撰写的作文。雅思考试中，直接抄袭题目要求的文本是无法得分的。 Why it matters: 考生必须用自己的话来转述题目（paraphrase）并表达个人观点。

Suggested Rewrites

• Nowadays famous people are photographed by professional photographers everywhere they go. 删除
• 无原创内容 请重新写一篇完整的议论文，包含引言段、主体段和结论段，字数不少于250字。
• 请勿抄袭题目 请重新提交您自己撰写的作文。雅思考试中，直接抄袭题目要求的文本是无法得分的。