Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample Response
Many people believe that online friendshipsfriendship is less valuablepossesses less value than in-person friendshipsfriendship. I completely agree with this opinion and believe that real-life friendships are more meaningful because of physical presence and shared experience.
Real-life friendships strengthen emotional connectionsconnection through physical presence. They enableIt enables people to interact in personhave real interactions and this, in turn, helps form close relationships and mutual understandingcontributes to forming intimate relations and understanding. In-person friendships, in fact, allow individuals to hear the tone of voice, body language, and facial expressions, and therefore it helps to facilitate effective communication. Moreover, physical interactions, such as high-fives, hugs, and shared activitiesphysical interactions, for example, high-fives, hugs and shared activities can foster a strong bondforge a strong affinity and develop a strong sensesharpen a keen sense of emotional intimacy that may be quite difficult to replicate fullydifficult to replace entirely through virtual interactions. For example, non-verbal cues, like posture, paralanguage, and eye contact, can deepen emotional connectionsdeepen the intimate connection.
Face-to-face friendshipPhysical friendship can also build lasting relationships through shared experiencesdue to shared experiences. In real-life friendships, people often share experiencespeople often have shared experiences in real-world settings. That is to say that they travel for pleasuretake pleasure trips, attend social events, or take part in recreational activities together. ConsequentlyIn consequence, these shared experiences create lastingabiding memories and can impart a keen sense of camaraderie to the relationship. For instance, going on an excursion with friends can create affectionate moments that last a lifetime, enhancing the overall friendship experience. These aspects are the inherent value contributing to the quality of friendship and virtual friendships completely lack these features.
To conclude, I believe that true friendship can only be built on physical presence and shared experience that cannot take place in virtual friendship. It is therefore real-life friendship proves to be more meaningful.
Why this response received Band 7.5
The response states a clear, consistent opinion and develops two relevant reasons through physical cues and shared experiences, supported by concrete examples. Its main limitation is repetition within both body paragraphs and some overstatement that online friendships completely lack these qualities, alongside several awkward expressions. Add a more nuanced comparison with online interaction and refine collocations so the argument becomes more precise and persuasive.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The response directly answers the question with a consistent position and develops two relevant, supported reasons.
Acknowledge how online friends can share experiences or emotional support, then explain why face-to-face contact remains stronger.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay progresses logically through a clear introduction, two focused body paragraphs, and a consistent conclusion, despite some repetition.
Remove overlapping explanations and examples so each paragraph contributes a distinct dimension of the comparison.
Lexical Resource
A varied topic-specific vocabulary conveys emotional connection and shared experience, though several ambitious collocations sound unnatural.
Use more natural combinations for emotional closeness, memorable experiences, companionship, and non-verbal communication.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A good range of complex structures is generally controlled, with occasional agreement, reference, and sentence-construction errors.
Check pronoun agreement and revise malformed emphasis structures, especially in the concluding sentences.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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