Opinion Essay

Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    Many assert that online friendships lack depth and authenticity and could be superficial while in-person connections are real friendships. I disagree with this opinion as I believe that the extent to which online friendships are meaningful depends on various factors, and they can indeed hold significant value in many people's lives.

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    Many people believe that online friendship possesses less value than in-person friendship. I completely agree with this opinion and believe that real-life friendships are more meaningful because of physical presence and shared experience.

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