Some people believe that old buildings should be protected by law. Others, however, think that they should be replaced by new buildings. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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While there is a growing movement to protect old buildings, many believe that they should be replaced by new and modern structures. While old buildings may have historical and cultural significance, I think that they often pose numerous safety risks and are no longer practical in today's society.
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In today's world, the debate over the fate of old buildings continues to be a contentious issue. Some people argue that old buildings should be preserved and protected by law, while others maintain that these buildings should be replaced by new ones.