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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time there is concern about it's impaction on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantapes of international tourism outweight the advantapes? In my opinion advantapes outweight the disadvantapes. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Tailond live from tourism. Lots of people work there as a seilomens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldn't be able to function properly. Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just can't pass because of rare animals or pleuts. Another thing is that people like traveling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean. Furthermore, tourism is now more growing industry highering tousands of people. There are makeing new places to work and to have fun. But on the other hand, people often forget that they aren't the only beings on the plenet. Many tourists are living garbage just anywhere. Some of them want an exotic suvenir so they pay for illegal things like dead or live animals or some sculpure. To sum up I think international traveling is a good thing but people must realise that there is something else besides them. They need to know that flora and fauna needs to be protected. People have to enjoy their holidays but alsow protect environment.

'Tourism' - friend or foe? Tourism is a very big industry in the modern time and is growing quite rapidly. Thousands of people travel everywhere to various destinations every year. Arguments have come up regarding the benefits and negative impacts of tourism on places and on its local inhabitants and environment; however, I believe there are more advantages than disadvantages of international tourism. People travel for various reasons; we travel for business purpose, holidays, visit friends and relatives etc. Travelling is mostly seen as a recreational activity. Tourism has many advantages. Tourism can play a tremendous part in a countrys economy, the more tourists visit a country and spend money there the better it is for the country; that way more money is circulated within the country and even the stability of their currency rate of exchange persists if not improve. Vendors and shops get to sell more goods and make an income. Tourism also has its non-monetary advantages; it brings cultures and people closer. People from all around the world get to share their culture with each other and even learn more. This is a good opportunity in education. Tourism seems to have some disadvantages too; However, I believe the problems caused by tourism are not something that cannot be solved or prevented. A lot of people believe that tourism can destroy or deviate culture and cause quite an impact on visited locations such as pollution and littering. People can adhere to their own beliefs and way of life if they want to; no one can really forcefully influence someone to change from their morals and ethics Pollution can be avoided by increasing usage of environmental friendly vehicles used for tours and rents, warnings and visual education on littering and smoking, Specific times can be allocated for tours to certain areas, such as peak times where local inhabitants feel uncomfortable due to too many foreigners. Where there are problems there can always be solutions. Tourism brings great amount of advantages for any place in many ways and is a 'win-win' exchange process. The very few problems caused can always be avoided or taken care of. I believe tourism should be highly promoted, specially in traditional and poor countries with natural beauty such as Bangladesh.

5th. March 1996 Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my room-mate. As you know we share one room, I can not study in the room at all any more if I still stay there. She always has friend visiting and has parties in the room. They make lots of noise and switch on the radio very loudly, for me this environment is very difficult to study and I need a quiet room. Even borrows my things without asking, it is very impolite. I request you can give me a new room next term because I have been asked her has parties in other place many times they still have parties in the room. I really can not stay in the same room with her. I would be grateful if you could change me a single room. Your faithfully, Catherine.

Accommodation Officer 13, Kings Road Edinburgh Dear Sir, Dear Madam, I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request for another accommodation next term. My main problem is that I cannot study in my room because my room-mate always has friends visiting. He also has parties, which usually ends early in the morning, several times a week. Furthermore he often borrows my things without asking me. I cannot accept this situation any longer. Especially because I have very imporant exams next term and I really must study hard. This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room next term. It would be most convenient for me if I haden't to share my room with somebody else. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. yours faithfully, Anja Schweizer

DEAR SIR OR MADAM The local public library wants to make improvements to. their services and facilites. In order to get ideas the public. The local public library need to bring old and new boock from all countris. That is the becuse All people want to know for the world Stories The local public library want to big spece for cabinet to put good type line for the boock. Their is resolt becouse when peopel came to the library to get a boock easily. your library dont huve boock properly becouse their are one boock is another plese and another is another line so not get a easeur. The every boock put line with each cuntry to gether an year put difrent difrent year put sepred. Then your library put cline and good type and good man. Even you cane put man to give people servis at home to dileverd for boock som old piople are problem to come your library to take boock that is my opinion for your local public library want your fiyethfuly

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm going to suggest some of my ideas about our local library Fist of all I would like to have a bigger parking space so that it will be more easyer for those who use the library This parking space can be done undernet the library which it will be provided with a lift. I think that this is the main problem for those who came to the library because everyone talkes about it and argue for the time wasthing to park the car around so by means of this idea the main problem can be solved. Another thing that I want to see to be ganged is to give the place a new look because it has been like this for at least 25 years. I would suggest to make a new referbisment like painting, carpentry work and more natural light espacially inside by means of big windows and sky lights. I even suggest that there can also be a small lift because elder people con take advantage of this too. In conclution the costomer care section must be prepared also to help people finding books more quicker and give them some advice as well so that this local public library will be more efficent to all kind of people

Dear Sir or Madam, This is im reference to your enquiry regarding The Suggestions to library I would like give opinion im this regard. I visited the library So many times and found facilities and Problem Side by Side. A library must Consist of Substantial amount of books, CDS and Cassets. These material Should be Placed and Organise im a Scientific manner So thet most of the people Can be benefited im the Same time. Im your library I liked the numbers of books you have. It almost Covers the major part of the requirment of People but the availability of the books at the right Place and time is the biggest Concern. In library Seating arrangements are very good too. The opening and Closing Timing realy Suits the People. But, the Situation is not at its best. You dor not have the facolity of Electronic material which you normally finds now a days. As I said the Placement of books must be given attention. I have also faced Problems when wanted to take away the books. you Should relax the Problem in this Procedure. Library Should be Calm and Safe. All the books Should be arranged as Per Catalog. This Sequential arrangement will not only ease the Pressure on Staff but also reduce the Complaints. More Electronic equipments Should indulg im the library facilities and matter available im the Shelves. Thanking you for your efforts to improve the Services for the better mant of the people im the locality.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my opinion about library services and send some suggestions to improve your operation. I have been using your library services for 25 years and even my son has started to use it as well. I really enjoy of your personel staff and the way they serve the library users. They are always polite, friendly and easy find what you want to. The library is equipped with the comfortable furniture which helps user to feel freely and work efficient. You also have the reading room with the daily newspapers, magazines and other informatic resources. I really appreciate all above-mentioned things in your library. But, I have some concerns I would like to share with you. The thing is I can not find anymore the recent edition books or books of authors of the current century. Of course, I understand we can always find them in the bookstores or in Internet. But everybody will agree with me that there is a great pleasure to read a book alive than in computer or others.resources. So, it would be nice if you check with your management to update it. And plus, I know, it would be costly but may be saving your time, to buy a computer and load a data base of your collection of books. We live and work in the 21st of century. That is all I would like to share with you. Yours faithfully,

who should be responsible for our People. It's true that the old Peoples situation gets worse in the many countries. The first question must be what they wants and what they needs?. Especially their necessity are more benefit more respect more quiet life. If they have been working for a long time, in the any company or in the Public sector, and when they get old that's means during their retiring retire's time, company or Goverment must be responsible of their welfare, it's just my opinion. They should take care of them. In addition to company or Goverment. If they have good money they can look after theirselves, we can do something to make easier their life. for example an organization, or a voluntary association, unions. The families or Relatives's responsibility depends on their wealthy situations. If they could do, they should do anything. Goverments or their former place could supply them with life insurence and a good Social Security policy. The Social community center or old age Pensioner like in the Britain, are very useful for them. For All of them life is hard and gets harder in the their old ages. They expect more attention for and good life. The old People, if don't want lost them we should do anything that what we're able to do. İ. BOZYİL P. Bozyil

Who should be responsible for our old people? One of the most challeging problems of today's society is the question who should be responsible for our old people. It's not only a financial problem but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay I would like to four different models Firstly, the company can be responsible for their retired employees. For this reason a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is, if you belief in the capitalist system, that it should be the cheapest solution. A possible problem is that the companies might have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs. A second solution is that the goveunment has to take the responsibilitiy for the old people's care. It can finance this with its tax incomes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the persent situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well. The govermneent can no longer afford supporting all the old peoples. Another way of solving this problem is to give back the responsibilitiy to the individual. That means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the time after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fair model because their will certainly exist people who can't afford to save part of their salary. In this case the govermument would have to care for them. A last solution is to go back to the old model of the "big family" who cares for all their members. I don't think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have so much changed. To sum up I have to admitt that I can't find a really good solution for this problem. All models have advantges and disadvantage. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future