You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Thank you friend for the holiday - Explain that you left your wallet in their house. - Give them instructions on how to send it back to you.
Sample Response
Dear Abc,
First, I would like to thank youFirstly this letter of mine is to thank you for the warm welcomewarm stay of mine at your place. Indeed, I madeIndeed I made so many good memories and I’llill always cherish this holiday spent with you and your family.
AmidBetween all the fun and making memoriesthe making of memories, I didn’t realise until I reached home that I had left my walletI forgot my wallet at your place in the side drawer of the room. It is a Coach’s wallet and it should be on the right-hand drawerright-hand side supporting drawer. I have all my IDsID’s in the wallet as well as mythe debit and credit cards. As I get olderWith the growing age, I have started forgetting things.
I request you to please mail me the wallet as soon as you can, if possible please double seal the package for safety. As of now I know I don’t have my driving licencelicense with me I cannot come there to pick it up. You’re most welcome to drop by if you have some time from your busy schedule. Pleaseplease let me know what you would prefer to doif what you are preferring to do so that I make further plans accordingly. Waiting to hear from you soon. Give my warm regards to your family. Thank you again for the lovely vacation.
Regards
Why this response received Band 6.5
The letter covers the holiday, identifies the wallet and its location, and gives a workable return request in a warm, mostly suitable tone. The main limitation is recurring awkward phrasing and weak sentence control, particularly in the final paragraph, which makes some instructions less direct. Prioritize concise, natural wording and clearly state one preferred mailing method with any necessary address or packaging details.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
All three bullet points are addressed with relevant detail, and the friendly purpose and tone remain clear throughout.
Make the return instructions more precise by naming the preferred delivery method and supplying the practical details needed to send the wallet.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter follows a sensible sequence and uses clear topic-based paragraphs, though the crowded final paragraph weakens flow.
Separate the mailing request, explanation, and optional visit into shorter sentences arranged in a clearer order of preference.
Lexical Resource
There is sufficient vocabulary for the situation, but awkward combinations such as warm stay of mine and supporting drawer reduce naturalness.
Replace forced expressions with familiar wording such as thank you for having me and the right-hand bedside drawer.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The response attempts varied structures, but punctuation, capitalization, contractions, sentence boundaries, and verb forms contain recurring errors.
Correct run-on sentences and fragments, and proofread forms such as I will, driving licence, and what you would prefer to do.
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IELTS General Training Writing Task 1
You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- Thank you friend for the holiday
- Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
- Give them instructions on how to send it back to you.
Your response
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