News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think to influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Sample Response
It is an undeniable fact that broadcasting the news on media (print or visual media) is written by news editors. And this decision is influenced by the authorities in powerthe current authority and ratings and competitionrating or competition. In my opinion, yes, we have become accustomed to seeing more negative newshad indulged in seeing the more negative news. HoweverBut, it is not advisablea better idea to show only positive news in the mediashow only the positive news in media because it undermines the primary purposereduces the real purpose of media.
To begin with, many factors influence the decision of editors. The main factors are politicians and the current authoritiesThe main one is politicians or current authorities; politicians suppressthe politician suppresses many media houses. For example, in China and Saudi Arabia nations, during the Corona Pandemic, their media were prohibited from displaying written content suffered from Corona. Another factor is thatAnother one, many news channels display news to get high ratings or TRP compared to their competitorscompetitor. These newsnew channels schedule the timefixed the timing for a particular show, for example, 9 p.m.9 Pm for expert debatesfor debate expert. All media houses use the same time for the same type of programmethe same episode and sensationalize the news for high ratings or reviews. Thus, the above factors have influenced the decision of editors.
In my opinion, ‘yes’, we are becoming used to negative news because different forms of media influence people's views and subconscious attitudespeople’s views or subconscious toward negativity. They focus on sensationalizing the news. People become boredfeel monotonous without the sub-title of breaking news. And most of the time, breaking news is bad news.
The answer to the question is clearly ‘no’; it is not an effective idea to present only positive news in front of the public as it will lose the real objective of media, which means to show every aspect of society except if it is good or bad.
In conclusion, I reiterated my opinion; the editor’s decision is affected by the power of politicians and competition for review. While I believe we have done our thinking to see more bad news these days, it is not mean that only showing the positive news in media can solve all the problems due to forgetting the real purpose of media.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response maintains clear positions on all three questions and organizes them into distinct, easy-to-follow sections. Its main limitation is that several explanations and examples are unclear or only briefly developed, while frequent grammatical and word-choice errors sometimes strain meaning. Prioritize rewriting each supporting point in accurate, natural sentences and extending it with a specific, clearly explained example.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
All parts of the task receive a clear answer, but the reasoning is uneven and some examples are insufficiently explained or unclear.
Develop each position with one accurate example whose connection to the argument is explicitly explained.
Coherence and Cohesion
The paragraph sequence is easy to follow, but cohesion is sometimes mechanical and short fragments interrupt the flow.
Combine closely related points into complete sentences and use referencing rather than repeatedly announcing opinions and conclusions.
Lexical Resource
The response has enough vocabulary for the topic, but frequent inaccurate collocations and word choices reduce precision and occasionally obscure meaning.
Use simpler, established expressions and check combinations such as "audience ratings," "become accustomed to," and "the purpose of the media."
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A mix of simple and complex forms is attempted, but frequent errors in tense, articles, agreement, sentence boundaries, and clause construction limit control.
Prioritize complete clause structures and consistent tense and agreement before attempting longer complex sentences.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think to influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
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