The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont.
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The pie chart, table, and bar chart illustratepresent membership composition, loan distribution by category, and total borrowing trends at Little Chalfont Library in 2016, as well as overall lending figures over the 2007–2016 decade.alongside annual loan volumes from 2007 to 2016.
Overall, adults aged 18 to 64 formed a slim majority ofconstituted the majority of library users, while fiction for both children and adults together accounted for over three-quarters (76%)three-quarters of all loans. Annual borrowing followed an overall upward trend over the decadeBorrowings followed a generally upward trajectory over the decade, reaching their highest point in 2016.
Looking first at membership in 2016,Regarding membership, 51% of users were aged 18 to 64, followed by children at 22%. Young adults aged 13 to 17 and those aged 65 and olderseniors aged 65 and over represented 15% and 12%, respectively. For borrowing patterns, adult fiction and children’s fiction each comprised 38% of total loans. Adult non-fiction contributed 13%, more than double the 6% for children’s non-fiction. Loans for young adults accounted for 2%, while adult audio books and children’s DVDs contributed 2% and 1%, respectively.children’s DVDs and adult audio books together made up the remaining 3%.
Annual loan volumes fluctuated between just under 16,000 and around 22,000. Starting at just under 16,000 in 2007, borrowings rose to a temporary peakhigh in 2011 before dipping in 2013. Figures then recovered, and loans peaked in 2016 at roughly 21,500.the final year saw the highest loan numbers for the entire period.
Why this response received Band 9.0
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