Semi-Formal Letter

Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: - suggest how you could help her in her home - say why you would like to do this work - explain when you will and will not be available

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  1. Band 8.5
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    Band 8.5

    Dear Mrs Barrett, I recently came across your advertisement regarding your need for help in your home for a few hours a day next summer, and I would love to offer my assistance. I could help you with a range of household tasks, such as cleaning, organising, preparing light meals, and running errands.

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    Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Elaine Sully, and I am writing this letter to make an enquiry if you still need somebody to help you at your home.

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