The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: - describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly - explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours - suggest what should be done about the problem
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Dear sir/mam, I am writing this letter to bring a disquieting issue of our locality to your notice regarding the litter disposition in our town ‘Virgomoon”. Our town has been suffering from a scourge of undisposed garbage owing to the lackadaisical nature of the cleanliness committee appointed by your council.
- Band 6.5View annotated correction →
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Dear Sir or Madam, I cannot really believe that I am writing such a letter to you about the messy rubbish collecting situation in my neighbourhood. And I am hoping that your mediation would solve the problem.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention the ongoing issues with the rubbish collection system in our neighbourhood, Lodi Road, New Delhi. Over the past few weeks, the service has been inconsistent, with collections either being delayed by several days or, in some cases, missed entirely.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.5
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express a grave situation that the community of "Lake West Spring" is facing due to the faulty and inadequate rubbish management system, especially for the last three to four weeks. With relation to the problems, the number of rubbish bins installed in the area is insufficient considering the total population.