The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in the swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of these resources. To what extent do you support or oppose the idea?
Sample Response
In our liveslife, we use Deletethe natural resources in many different ways and in fact natural resources are vital for our existenceexistences. Our lives will simply become impossible if we stop using natural resources. But it is a matter of pity that the way we overuse those resources. The existing natural resources are limited and the demand and consumption are increasing steadilyday by day as the world's population increasesas the world population is increasing. As a result, natural resources are rather being reduced with the increased and imprudent uses. We must control the overuse of these priceless resources for our own survival.our own survival
The population and itstheir demand are increasing and with technological advancesimprovements the natural resources are being used more than at any other timemore than any other time Deletein the human history. We use themthose to meet our daily and vital needs. For instance, we use natural gas to cook food. But the natural resources such as fuel and gasnatural resources like fuels and gas are also used to satisfy our desire for luxury goodsfulfil our luxury. In fact, the general public willthe mass people will try to use natural resources to follow new fashions and meet changing demandsadopt new fashions and changing demands. People changechanges their furniture and carstheir furniture models, car models so frequently and it has become a symbol of their statusprominence. Thus they use natural resources like wood and fuel so unwisely and in my opinion, this is quite unnecessary.
The government of a country sworn to look after the betterment of the countrymen. People are unaware of the aftereffects of this overuse. So the government has to play a vital role by sending the message to the mass population and by taking necessary initiatives to prevent this overuse of the natural resources. However, we all should understand the issue and should help preventtake part to prevent the overuse of our natural resources. The government can not stop such a bad trend all alone. Making new furniture is a right to a citizen and Government can not stop this by enforcing laws only. The citizen must be conscious about the devastating aftereffects.
In conclusion, I personally believe that the Government should be strict and discourage the mass people overusing natural resources. In addition, a comprehensive effort by all is needed to make the steps taken by the Government successful.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The essay gives a clear supportive position and relevant discussion of finite resources, population growth, luxury consumption, government responsibility, and individual awareness. Its main limitation is that the proposed government response remains vague and the argument repeats overuse rather than explaining specific environmental consequences or policies; the highest-priority improvement is to develop concrete measures such as taxation, recycling standards, public education, or sustainable-product incentives.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The position is consistent and the causes of unnecessary consumption are relevant, but policy solutions and environmental impacts are only generally developed.
Explain two specific government measures and show how each would reduce furniture, fuel, or other resource consumption without preventing essential use.
Coherence and Cohesion
The four-paragraph structure provides broad progression from the problem to consumption and responsibility, but repetition and loose links reduce focus.
Use one paragraph for why overuse occurs and another for clearly sequenced government and citizen solutions, avoiding repeated statements that resources are limited.
Lexical Resource
The response has adequate topic vocabulary, but frequent inaccurate expressions such as "vital for our existences," "fulfil our luxury," and "mass people" weaken precision.
Use natural phrases such as "essential to human life," "satisfy non-essential wants," "the general public," and "resource depletion."
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Meaning remains broadly clear, but recurring agreement, article, clause, and verb-pattern errors affect fluency throughout.
Correct forms such as "people change their furniture," "the government is responsible," and "discourage people from overusing natural resources."
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The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in the swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of these resources. To what extent do you support or oppose the idea?
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