Opinion Essay

Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    With the advent of the internet, young people can now achieve their work and study goals far easier than in previous years. Personally, I only partly agree with this idea because I do not believe that the internet has made such a significant impact on the quality of people’s work and study.

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    Lexical Resource
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    For some people, the Internet has efficaciously assisted the young and laborers in fulfilling academic and occupational targets with considerably more ease. From my standpoint, while there are still specific issues, the Internet is indeed a vessel for students’ and workers’ progression in their respective fields.

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