Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

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Many people associate wealth accumulation and money with happiness in life. While it is certainly true that money can eliminate some reasons for distress, and give gratification in life, it is not the primary driving force to bringing happiness as our positive mindset, personal relationship, and health bring lasting delight in life.