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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What do you think are the causes of this development and what measures could be taken to solve it?

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  1. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 5.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.0

    Cultural heritage is enriched by traditional festivals and celebrations, serving as a bridge to the past and fostering a sense of community in the present. Yet, in various parts of the globe, these cherished events are vanishing.

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  2. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    Traditional festivals and cultural celebrations are on the verge of disappearance in many parts of the world even though they have a paramount importance to the uniqueness of a country and a group of people.

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