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Opinion Essay

Some people think that because of email and telephone, communication among people is less personal now than it used to be. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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  1. Band 6.5
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    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Lexical Resource
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    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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    The modern communication system, with its innovations like phones and emails, has made our life comfortable while making communication cheaper, faster and widespread. However, some people express their concern that with the dependency on such technology and tools, comes the downfall of personal relation and interaction.

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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Lexical Resource
    Band 8.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 8.0

    The assertion that modern communication methods, such as email and telephone conversations, have led to a reduction in the personal nature of interactions is a complex matter. While it is true that these technologies can lack the richness of face-to-face communication, they have also introduced new dimensions to human connection that should not be overlooked.

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