Discussion Essay

Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give own your opinion.

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    Friends are important people in our life and our friendship often defines what type of person we are. When it comes to choosing companions, some believe our friends should always agree with us, while others prefer to have companions who sometimes differ on important issues.

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    It is often said that friends are the family we choose and it is not uncommon for people to gravitate towards friends who share their interests, beliefs, and opinions. However, some people argue that it is better to have friends who always agree with them, while others believe that friends who sometimes disagree with them are more valuable.

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