The charts below show the main reasons why students chose a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.
Sample Response
The chartschart compares the primary reasons why students chose a particular universityspecific universities in the United Kingdom in two years, 1997 and 2007.
Overall,A general overview of the data suggests that the suitability of degree courses remained the main consideration throughout the period. However, there was a notable shift towards considering proximity to the parental home as a deciding factor, while interest in the university’s sports and social activitiesuniversities’ social and sports facilities declined sharplyexperienced a sharp decline.
A more detailed examination reveals that the proportion of students choosing the university because of its proximity to their parental homeseeking proximity to parental homes more than doubled from 10% to 22%doubled from 10 to 22%. In contrast, the importance given to good sports and social activities fell from 19 to just 6%.
Meanwhile, the emphasis on quality of teaching and resources showed marginal increases that ranged between 15 and 21% for both categories, suggesting a steady but not pivotal interest among students. The most popular reason, the suitability of degree courses, remained relatively stable with a slight increase from 35 to 37%.
Why this response received Band 8.0
The response is concise, well organised, and uses flexible language to highlight the dominant reason and the largest changes clearly. Its main limitation is a factual misreading: quality of resources fell from 21% to 17%, although the report groups it with teaching as an increase. Correct that comparison and state the two smaller changes separately to make the coverage fully accurate and precise.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
The report presents a strong overview and accurately covers most major comparisons, but it misreports the direction of change for quality of resources.
State separately that teaching rose from 15% to 18% while resources declined from 21% to 17%.
Coherence and Cohesion
The response is logically sequenced, clearly paragraphised, and uses cohesive devices naturally to move from overview to detailed comparisons.
Keep the same structure while making the final detail paragraph contrast the two smaller changes more explicitly.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is varied, precise, and well suited to comparative data, with effective phrases for stability, shifts, and proportional change.
Prefer singular wording such as a particular university and use neutral data description instead of interpretive phrasing such as pivotal interest.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of complex sentence structures is used accurately, and the response is consistently easy to read.
Maintain this control while checking noun reference and possessive choices for maximum precision in chart descriptions.
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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1
The charts below show the main reasons why students chose a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.
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