Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: - suggest how you could help her in her home - say why you would like to do this work - explain when you will and will not be available

Task Achievement

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 7.0

Lexical Resource

Band 7.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 7.0

Dear Mrs Barrett, I am Lia Lima, a university student and a local in the neighbourhood, writing to you to show my interest in helping you with your household work next summer. I can help you with cleaning the kitchen, cooking a few items, taking the garbage outside and doing groceries.

Task Achievement

Band 7.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 8.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.5

Dear Mrs Barrett, I am Lia Lima, a university student and a local in the neighbourhood, writing to you to show my interest in helping you with your household work next summer. I can help you with cleaning the kitchen, cooking a few items, taking the garbage outside and doing groceries.

Task Achievement

Band 8.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 8.5

Lexical Resource

Band 8.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 8.5

Dear Mrs Barrett, I recently came across your advertisement regarding your need for help in your home for a few hours a day next summer, and I would love to offer my assistance. I could help you with a range of household tasks, such as cleaning, organising, preparing light meals, and running errands.