Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?
Sample Response
It has become increasingly common in recent years for cities to be filledinundated with cars and, consequently, higher levels of traffic congestionincreased levels of traffic. In my opinion, this is a very real phenomenon and governments could do more to encourage other modes of transport.
There is little doubt that the main cause of traffic congestionthe main cause of traffic is more cars in urban areas. One natural consequence of a burgeoning global middle class is a rise in automobile ownership. This is reflected not only in statistics but also in the day-to-day reality of millions living in densely populated cities such as Los Angeles, Beijing, and London. The average person living in those cities must choose between sitting in traffic, using public transport, or living near their workplaceresiding near to their workplace. There is little chance this pattern will change in the future as many people see owning a car as a sign of social status and a mark of success in life in generallife generally.
Since most car owners will not be dissuaded by higher prices, the best method to combat traffic congestioncombat traffic is to promote other modes of transportstimulate other kinds of transportation. Since most cities already possess public transportation in the form of buses and subways, governments can simply commit to maintaining and expanding existing options. A standout example of this would be the London Underground, whichUnderground which has dozens of lines and is maintained to a high standard. Another pragmatic solution would be to encourage the use of bikes and motorbikes. Many European countries do this by providing free bicycles for short rides. In Southeast Asian countries such as Vietnam, urban planners provide lanes specifically for compact motorbikes on which there is far less trafficwhere there is far less traffic than in the lanes for largerbulky cars.
In conclusion, there is clear evidence that cities are more crowded than ever before and the state can curb this trend by enacting policies to promote bicycles and motorbikes in cities. This is a crucial reform not only for quality of life but also the environmental impact.
Why this response received Band 8.0
The response is strongest in its clear position, confident progression, and well-developed range of transport measures supported by relevant examples. Its main limitation is that some proposals are framed primarily as ways to reduce traffic rather than being explicitly connected to discouraging car ownership; the highest-priority improvement is to explain more precisely how each policy would change individual ownership decisions.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
Both questions are answered directly with a clear position and well-developed, relevant measures.
Make the causal link between each transport policy and reduced private car ownership fully explicit.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ideas progress logically through focused paragraphs, with cohesive devices used clearly and effectively.
Vary recurring transitions such as 'Since' to make the progression feel even more natural.
Lexical Resource
A wide and precise vocabulary conveys ideas flexibly, including effective topic-specific language.
Refine occasional collocations such as 'residing near to' and the final phrase about environmental impact.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of complex structures is controlled accurately, with only isolated minor lapses.
Polish the final parallel construction so both benefits after 'not only...but also' are grammatically complete.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?
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