Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Sample Response

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In the pastIn years gone by, before the age of the telegraph or telephone, letter writing was the main means of communication for most people. Since then we have developed faster and more direct ways of contacting people, and personal mail has become relatively rare. It is true that in many cases in which our parents would have written a letterwhere our parents would have written a letter, we prefer to pick up the phone, email or even textto pick up the phone, to email or even to text instead. These are perfectly suitable ways of inviting friends to call round or exchanging news with a family member, for example, and they have the advantage of immediate communicationthe advantage that the communication is immediate and we can receive a reply very quickly. In business, too, fax and email are extremely useful. However, in my opinion, there are timesin my opinion there are times when there is no suitable alternative to a letterno alternative to a letter. Letters are generally more formal and carefully composed than emails. This makes them more suitable for occasions when lettersthey are likely to be kept and re-read, perhaps several times, by the recipient, such as formal letters of thanks or sympathyas with formal letters of thanks or sympathy. In addition, letters provide a written record, unlike telephone calls, so they are also a better way of setting out an important or complex argument, for example, in official complaints or legal mattersas in official complaints or legal matters. In conclusion, I would definitely agree that there are fewer occasionstimes when we need to write letters than in the past. On the other hand, I feel there are still some important occasions when a letter is the most appropriate form of communication.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.5

The response offers a thoughtful, fully relevant position: modern methods have replaced many letters, while formal or lasting communication still gives letters a distinct role. Its ideas are expressed with precise vocabulary and strong grammatical control, but presenting the entire argument as one paragraph obscures the otherwise clear progression. The highest priority is to divide the discussion into purposeful paragraphs that make its stages immediately visible.

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IELTS Writing Criteria Scores

TR

Task Response

8.0
Scoring rule

The response directly answers the extent question, sustains a nuanced position, and develops both sides with convincing, specific examples.

Next step

Add a little more evaluation of why written permanence matters today to make the central qualification even more incisive.

CC

Coherence and Cohesion

6.0
Scoring rule

Ideas progress smoothly and cohesive devices are handled naturally, but the absence of paragraph breaks substantially weakens structural clarity.

Next step

Create separate paragraphs for modern alternatives, the continuing value of letters, and the final position so the logical stages are explicit.

LR

Lexical Resource

8.0
Scoring rule

Vocabulary is wide, precise, and natural, including effective language for formality, immediacy, permanence, and complex communication.

Next step

Maintain this precision while varying the repeated noun letters where a clear reference or suitable synonym would sound more economical.

GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

8.0
Scoring rule

A wide range of complex sentence forms is used accurately and flexibly, with only very minor lapses that do not impede meaning.

Next step

Polish punctuation in the longest sentences so that multiple comparisons and examples remain effortless to process.

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IELTS Writing Task 2

Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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