Many scientists and linguists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future. How far do you agree or disagree with this prediction?
Sample Response
The notion that a single global language will become universally adopted is a topic of ongoing debate among scientists and linguists. While some argue that such a phenomenon is likely to occur, I disagree withfind myself in disagreement with this prediction due to the persistence of cultural diversity and the intrinsic value of linguistic heritage.
Firstly, the idea of a single global languageuniversally chosen global language overlooks the rich cultural diversity that defines humanity and that is why will not be accepted by nations. Language is deeply intertwined with culture, and it serves as a vessel for expressing unique cultural identities, traditions, and historical narratives. The world is a mosaic of distinct cultures, each with its own languages that have evolved over centuries, and people would not sacrifice their languages and traditions for the sake of a global language. For example, during the colonial period, authorities tried to impose their languages on local peoplepush their languages to the locals. Despite their popularity, they have not been able to diminish people's deeply rooted connection to their local languagespeople's deeply rooted connections with their local languages.
Secondly, language embodies a sense of identity and belonging for communities around the world, and that is why it is impossible to erase local languages and impose a global language on people of all nationalitiesimpose a global language on all nationalities. The preservation of linguistic heritage is crucial forin maintaining the connections between generations and anchoring individuals to their roots. The loss of indigenous languages has often been associated with the weakening of cultural bonds and the erosiondiminishment of traditional knowledge. For instance, efforts to revitalize languages such as Maori in New Zealand and Welsh in Walesthe revitalization efforts of languages like Maori in New Zealand and Welsh in Wales underscore the importance of preserving linguistic diversity to safeguard cultural heritage.
In conclusion, while the prospect of a single global language may seem appealing in terms of communication efficiency, it disregards the intricate interplay between language, culture, and identity. Therefore, linguistic diversity and cultural heritage will keep prevailing and despite the popularity of a few global languages, most people keep communicating in their mother tongue.
Why this response received Band 8.0
The response presents a clear, sustained disagreement and supports it with relevant discussion of culture, identity, and language-preservation examples. Its main limitation is that the two central arguments overlap considerably, while a few awkward or incomplete constructions reduce precision. The highest-priority improvement is to distinguish the reasons more sharply and refine the small number of syntactic and collocational lapses.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The prediction is addressed directly through a clear position and well-developed reasons supported by relevant examples.
Make the two main reasons more distinct, for example by separating resistance based on identity from practical barriers to universal adoption.
Coherence and Cohesion
The argument progresses clearly from the stated position through two logically sequenced body paragraphs to a consistent conclusion.
Reduce repeated causal framing such as 'that is why' and create a sharper conceptual transition between cultural diversity and linguistic heritage.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is wide-ranging and often precise, with effective language for culture and identity, though a few collocations are unnatural.
Refine expressions such as 'push their languages to the locals' and 'will keep prevailing' to maintain natural precision throughout.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of complex sentences is handled accurately overall, with only occasional non-impeding structural errors.
Correct omitted subjects and overloaded coordination, especially in 'that is why will not be accepted' and the final sentence.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Many scientists and linguists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future. How far do you agree or disagree with this prediction?
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