Cinema attendance in some countries is on the decline. What do you think are the causes of this development and what measures could be taken to solve it?

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Although, cinema is becoming increasingly popular all over the world, but the result of a recent research reveals a downward trend cinema viewers affecting many countries in relation to this. This essay will discuss both causes of this trend and will propose a solution to solve this problem.