Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor in the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, many people give much more focus on how to create the better education system in order to ensure the country's development. A majority of people believe that the education system is the only essential method for that, however, I do disagree with that statement.