In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

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The growing affordability of fast food is becoming prevalent in many parts of the world. I believe that the drawbacks of the ubiquity of convenience food outweigh the benefits it offers because although it proves to be an easily affordable food choice for lower-income families, these foods cause severe damage to health.