It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Task Response

Band 7.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 8.0

Lexical Resource

Band 8.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 8.0

Some would argue that taking risks, both in terms of one’s private life and one’s working career, is advantageous overall. I am generally in agreement with this contention due to the potential for advancement and growth.